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What do you think?

just played the game for a bit (got around to beating up bandits in the first tower) and I have to say that this was pretty good! the plot is nicely done and has that awesome low-fantasy vibe to it, the characters are great (i especially love that instead of some generic fantasy party you get a gobbo alchemist, a half-troll (i guess?..) warrior and AN OLD MAN), the humour is on-point (i lost myself at the INNINNINN girl's joke about her father falling through the roof and the INTRUDERS! joke at the first tower), and the game perfroms very well - i haven't found a single bug while playing it - good job, Daniel! also the idea behind assasin cooks is pretty unique and cool - i love it jajajajajaja

but, with all that said, there are a few (albeit pretty small) problems with the game - namely the grammar and spelling - there's lots of small mistakes in the text here in there, i've wrote down most of the ones i've found while playing in the next paragraph) as for the other problems - firstly, when talking to the guy in the village that tells about the dazzled and tripped conditions, Jansen's portrait has a metal mask, for some reason?.. and the game lacks a prologue or an exposition at the start which makes it hard for players that haven't read the game's description on gamejolt to get what it's about - but I hope that you'll add a prologue somewhere in the future, Daniel!)

as for the spelling mistakes and grammar errors, here: the green-hatted blacksmith guy says "sheilds" instead of "shields", the hooded merchant sells a mining pick which has an error in its description - it says "minarels" instead of "minerals") next, the guy in echanted armor when askes about the mind-reading mages returning says "heratic" instead of "heretic". the girl with sky-like attire and a big ol' smile in the village says "religon" instead of religion and "stike" instead of "strike", next, when, Gabble introduces herself she says "alchemist extrodaniare" instead of "alchemist extraordinare", when debriefing Adriana says "affiars" instead of "affairs", and, finally, sir Lorant's class says "Mercanery" instead of "Mercenary") Daniel, i hope that you'll fix all of the problems in the game and polish it a bit so that it will be even better that it is now!)

all in all, Blackvein Valley has a lot of potential and already offers a pretty great experience - i loved exploring the village, talking to it's denizens and finding out more and more about the lore of the world as much as i loved to read through the dialogues between the main party members!) Daniel, i wish you best of luck, lots of inspiration and nerves of steel while developing the game!) take care!

Blakvein Valley has been overrun by bandits, you play as Jansen, a wandering warrior hired by the heiress of the Blakvein family to rid the valley of the interlopers and restore order to the valley. #rpg #adventure This is my first game. I hope you enjoy it.



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Going to be honest with you, I don't remember all the changes I made because I spent a week and a half with writer's block struggling to write a scene. But I did give certain bosses a 2nd phase and I added more items and fixed some bugs. Have a good day.

Real quick update. There was a big bug where you couldn't play the damn game. That has been fixed. sorry about that.

I lied the next update is now.

The next update will be out on Christmas.

Who in their right mind would've guessed that another new build would be posted today? Certainly not I. So yeah more story, weapons, items, characters, maps ,enemies, quests, and a quest journal. Have fun.

Just a small update this time. a few fixes and I added and opening cutscene.

New Build is up. more story, more enemies, more items, weapons and amour. Old spelling errors corrected and bugs fixed. Levelling and combat has been adjusted. Feedback is absolutely welcome.