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"The blue crystal in the head of the mans shines. Some little shards of magic crystalizes around the body of a man of a unknow specie, every cristal going around the body, dancing in a erratic way that only the primals can understand.

The eyes of the man opens, making the crystals drop for the mid air, and dissapear in ashes.

How many time had passed since your cristal had been replenished in essence? What body now belong to your existence?

So many questions, but they are very common for an ancient specie as yours"

Just another shard, is a videogame where you take the control on one of the crystalis. A very unique specie of race in Lothram, a specie who lives through the body and essence of other who exist in this world.

"You, as one of the child of the cristaly finally awakes one day since your last life. Your hearth, and mind are the same, since as always, your existence is linked to the cristal in your forehead, but your body, as every time that happens, is different, even for you.

You had lived as a dwarf, as a troll, as a riquia, as a undead, and even as a infame ispah. But the body where you reside now is different, the pale skin with tones of blue, and the white hair makes you think that your specie is not so away from the isolated Frigidts from the Steir mountains. But that burning sensation in your veins, you are sure that there is something more. "

This game is based in a own story that I had been writting for some years in my head, and in some ink and paper. As I said before, Im trying to create a story, not based on the typical cliche of "hero/anti-hero against the world" but a story where everything is maybe not new, but at least the most unique possible at my hands.

I have 0 knowledge about the motor where I'm working, and I have 0 experience on publishing/creating stories for the public. So if anyone find something that makes nonsense, or if you have any suggestions (that doesnt change the plot) I will be open to that.

If this works, I will be working on a continued story, or a different story for another "Crystaly" based on what the opinion is received.

Thanks in regards for reading this, and if you try the game, thanks for doing it.

Q&A:

  • Can't you make some original art for your game?

I bought it on steam the past year in my birthday, thinking to start with this odissey early. Due to some problems, it never happened until today, and well the engine is more easy for a primal mind as mine.

  • Can't you make some original art for your game?

No. My art skills are equal to the balance in my bank account.

  • What the balance on your bank account?

I don't have a bank account.

  • Why dont take advice on the plot?

Take advice of the plot, and be guided by what the people say on your story, is equal to dont tell and transmite nothing of what you want. You can accept criticism, you can accept some hate, but accept to change something in your story for the sake and glory of others are equal to disrespect your own ego and what you beliefs are.

  • Can I help on any way?

If you are an artist and want to help me with this, for the god sake, yeah, I will be pleased. If you are thinking in making a donation... well I will not lie, I will be using that money to probably hire an artist, seek for help about how to create this game, and the most important, dont die of starvation because Im unemployed (yeah ladies, this man can make rice to survive for a week).

  • How much costumized will be the game?

I am thinking on customize every little piece of text that I can. Even customise spells, descriptions, and everything that I'm capable to do.

  • How much different is the game of the world to ours?

Based on the main story, the game of the world is bigger, and I mean, very bigger compared to ours. One example of this, is the lack of wars between the kingdoms. The world have so many resources that only some very rare species, minerals and races had been going extinguished by the lack of this.

Another hint on the story, is that even with the knowledge of the most acient species (around 1,000 or more years) there are stills species who are unknown, continents that had been never apparead on the topography of the extense world maps, and myths that are stills under lot of layers of plot and mysticism.

  • The is going to be multiple finals?

I dont thinks that is going to happen, most because I lack the knowledge to do that, and I don't want to make the game a complete game: "Find the mysterious final". Only to be a final where your pj, wears a little tuxedo and sing to the moon.

  • Can we have a final like that?

Maybe.

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