Lorenzo's Revenge

This is my FIRST rpg using RPG Maker MV. This game is based off of my friends and I. It tells a story about a bullied child, Lorenzo, who seeks out power to combat said bullies but soon becomes drunk with power and pushes the limits by taking over the world. The story still needs to be worked on, the gameplay needs to be balanced, the world needs a few more areas and we're working on making our own art for the game. Please tell me what you think :)
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