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lookin cool so far, now let me say some stuff about that could improve, The green soul using the mouse it's kinda bad, it could use the arrow instead, but if ya won't change that, you could put some indicator where the mouse is, so you don't ended up putting it in the middle when you're spinning.

you got no idea how much i love you, it took so long for someone to actually make a petaly fangame. it is pretty good so far for a work in progress but i kinda do have some lil nick-picks here n there, so sorry for the yappin. these are just personal of course, you dont need to make changes you dont want to. some attacks just go on for too long, like the bouncing black blobs or the box eye attack, which i personally think is a bit too easy, maybe adding another eye or some thing like the pellet circles could make it better. same can go for those attacks were petaly simply shoots his gun, maybe make it a bit random where he shoots or once again add some other attack elements. as for the whole problem with controlling the green soul with the mouse, i think it can easily be fix by pressing the right arrow to turn it clockwise, and left the opposite way. maybe add a lil tooltip to tell you how to use it. i love the color pellets attack but think the second one is a teensy tiny bit too hard with how fast petaly shoots. i think it would be cool if you could add an attack or two where petaly uses his lasso to directly hold your soul like starlo in undertale yellow, as you have to avoid incoming petals. i also really like those attacks where petaly shoots you with a gun "beam" whatever it is called, and in some attacks could maybe focus in on wherever the soul is. as for the final attack i think it is a too easy, as you can just slightly move up and down to avoid the hyper-gonerish attack. i think a good way to fix it would be to make that part shorter, and add a lemonbread esc attack where petaly chomps down on you and you gotta go into the lil spots he cant reach. and if ya want something afterwards. and of course some animation is a bit rough, specifically petaly, but i know this is early access and will definitey improve with time, so i cant really say anything about that. also idk if ya noticed but the theme includes the winterer's outro, so maybe just download the one for soundcloud, or if you somehow find a better remix use that one. again this is all just a suggestion and you dont need to heed to what i say, and i know how hard coding can be although i myself hadnt tried it ever. you are also after all making this in the image of what Jas had put out on the reference sheets. but if you really want some good ideas, i think you can shoot your shot at Jas himself and maybe get his input and ideas, im sure he would be thrilled at an idea of a petaly fangame. im really excited to see how good this game will become.

A fight for a fanmade DELTARUNE chapter 3 character named Petaly, YOUR MOST!!!

Petaly made by Tumourloaf.

I tried to make this fight as accurate as possible to Tumourloaf's original concept for petaly. If you would like to know his lore, go to (https://toyhou.se/23907621.petaly)

WARNING!!!

THIS GAME IS BROKEN.

I'm currently still working on it.

This page is up for if somebody wants to test it out or give me advice for improvement.

List of bugs/Things yet to be added includes:

  1. No ACTing, ITEMs or MERCY In the menu, only fighting so far.

  2. Very buggy, maybe laggy.

  3. Sometimes little flying heads love to make out. (It'll make sense I swear)

  4. Low quality.

  5. No checking

  6. No HP yet.

Anyway, hope you like my game (:

#undertale #deltarune #fangame



all-ages
Mild Cartoon Violence
Fantasy Violence
Comical Shenanigans

So, I’m really sorry, but I’m not continuing this game anymore after I got unapproved by Petaly’s creator to post this, sorry.