First Chapter Sample/ Show me your support. [TP] for The Protagonist. Since he dont know his name yet. Its good i like it.

[TP Wakes up in an apartment. Sees bottles of whiskey everywhere, alcohol spilled on the wooden floor. He gets up to see a desk on which he sees a picture of a man and a woman hugging near a water fountain on a sunny day. [TP] looks around more and sees a gun (revolver) on the desk with a Golden Detective Star, an unopened bottle of vodka, a watch that was showing 19:57 , Gun bullets and a rusty razor. On the floor he saw a crowbar, two dead men and a note saying ( Love fast and strong or the person you love will be gone, faster then you think).He took the gun, the bullets and the star. [TP] started asking himself questions “who am i? What is this place? what have i done?”. [TP] was wearing a long gray coat and a round straw hat, he investigated his pockets in one he found a not saying “You have 2 days, You find that woman in the picture or you will end up like your friends’ he started looking at those dead men on the ground with their heads bleeding from the back. [TP] took the picture and opened a door. There was a mirror, in it he saw the same man he saw on the picture. ‘who is she?’ [TP] asked himself. [TP] was a middle aged man in his early 30’s. He had parted hair on the left and he looked like he had’t used a razor in a week or two, [TP] looked at a scar on his nose, it looked like he tried to cut the bottom part his nose off. He tried opening the other door, this one looked like someone was shooting at it. He pulled the handle but the door appeared stuck. He thumped the door with the bottom of his fist, it opened. The scene was a corridor with leaks through its wooden ceiling captured by buckets filled half way with water, the corridor ended with wooden doors which appeared to have been a shooting target too. [TP] ran up to the door and kicked it open.

Will the Protag survive? Who sent the note? Who is the woman? Who will help him? Will he have to use his gun? Who are the men?

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