What do you think of this Cube I made?

I'm trying to make a Manga but it's uh- terrible

Should I make a bossfight of myself?

FlameGDPS Lvl 1 (canceled teaser)

FlameGDPS Lvl 3 (canceled teaser)

My recent project

FlameGDPS (canceled)

My second recent project

Super Wubtendo prev 1

Is this what you wanted Icerow?