I'm trying to make a Manga but it's uh- terrible

Should I make a bossfight of myself?

Is this what you wanted Icerow?

FlameGDPS (canceled)

Super Wubtendo prev 1

Am i cooked?

My second recent project

FlameGDPS Lvl 2 (canceled teaser)

FlameGDPS Lvl 1 (canceled teaser)

FlameGDPS Lvl 3 (canceled teaser)