I'm trying to make a Manga but it's uh- terrible

What do you think of this Cube I made?

FlameGDPS Lvl 1 (canceled teaser)

FlameGDPS (canceled)

Is this what you wanted Icerow?

FlameGDPS Lvl 3 (canceled teaser)

Super Wubtendo prev 1

FlameGDPS Lvl 2 (canceled teaser)

Should I make a bossfight of myself?

My second recent project