8 months ago

I'm looking for feedback for my dream video game project: Ju'maze the Jag'zara

I've written a summary about the games plot. It would mean a lot to me for anybody to give it a read and tell me any thoughts on it. Thank you 😊


Ju'maze the Jag'zara

Video Game Plot Summary

by: Jahsier Jones

Ju'maze is a rasp-blueberry colored Jag'zara who lives on an island named Hush Horizon Ilse with his Tree Rangakoo sister, Tee'luu. But one day, as Ju'maze was on his regular day to day fruit picking, a huge portal forms above the isle raining a horde of mice like minions from above, terrorizing the inhabitants on the island! Ju’maze decides to see what’s going on, as he heads towards the Mu’ Jungle Feral village bashing his way through enemies, swinging and climbing from tree to tree, and taking down a giant armadillo beast. When Ju'maze arrives, he’s shocked to see a tiny number of villagers in the village, and spots his sister Tee'luu fighting off a bunch of minions. After he lends a quick tail (hand), Tee’luu informs her brother that those little rodents have captured most of the village’s people and are taking them to the top of Mu’ Mountain! Tee’luu hurriedly heads over to the mountains with a heroic attitude as Ju’maze follows behind for her sister's safety. Upon reaching the top of the mountain, Tee’luu is quickly captured by a monster like vine by a girl sitting on a giant flower, mocking the tree rangakoo’s attempt at defeating her and her colossal plants. The girl reveals herself to be an oojah, with a love for nature and part of a group called The Chaos Alley under the rule of the dark queen sorcerer, Zina. Ju’maze asks for answers but is met with a battle against the female oojah. After a sweet victory against the oojah, she makes her escape, But not without kidnapping his sister in a cage. Now with a primary goal to get Tee’luu back from an unknown instrumental evil, sets on a wild journey across each area of the Hush Horizon Ilse to not only stop this invasion chaos, but to find a way to reunite with his sister again.



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