How do i improve this?

Happy haloween

Who would work here

@RaleDesign is a Jolter to Watch! They post great Minecraft builds and designs! Follow them before the quest ends on November 19 and you'll get Coins!

This needs free bird

Minin' away....I don't know what to mine I'll mine this anyway in this Minecraft day...

This game is fun

This would be great advertising for amazon

#WIPWednesday i miss doing wip wednesdays so this is what im currently working on the last scene is unfinished and i still have alot of scenes to add but i really like alot of stuff i have done so far so i might aswell show that of :D

Nice