Composition is my problem

This is a 100% real photo

My first Helloween render

Nothing new, but I tried

M3 GTR

(From NFS MW)

I'm alive, here's a robotic hand

Hooray, from this second I have a prototype of my first "normal" game.

Luigi s Mansion Ghost

I'm trying to replicate the NFS Unbound style.

Experimenting with materials (Hand-painted material, or something similar)