So, as you may know I said I was working on the story for the next part of local attack 2. And I am! It’s going well. Trust me, it will be loads better. First off, I would like to say I wrote this whole thing and then it just decided to close. Second, I have come up with loads of good ideas. I can’t tell you much, though! I have taken a different direction with the choices. Before, you would get a description of what was happening and a few choices. One would progress the story, the others would kill or trap you and you would have to restart!
Well now, instead of a linear story, it is more like a tree-like story. All choices could progress or all choices could make you restart. There might even be different endings!
Another thing is that the game, instead of taking a very real story feel, will involve a bit more fiction. (Because crawling through a food slot to escape is realistic.)
Now here is a teaser. It teases a new important character. It does support the more fiction like approach. Sorry it’s written in script form, I couldn’t be bothered to tidy it up:
-MENU-
Plot:
You open the wide doors you found. Hoping it wasn’t a turret, you look at the desolate, empty land in front of you. Saying goodbye to the prison with the flickering, dim lights and the puddles on the floor making you almost slip, you leave. You recognize nothing…
-START_GAME- | Continue the story…
-START_GAME-
Everything was different. For a second you thought: “Maybe this is where I am used to. Maybe it’s just the aftermath.” Absolutely no one was visible. You were alone.
There is a shop over there… I can’t read what it’s called though. It almost looks familiar!
-SHOP- | Go into the familiar shop.
I’m not going in any of those shops! There could be someone in there… with a gun! I will explore.
-EXPLORE- | Explore the surroundings
-SHOP-
You went into the shop. Yes. You recognized it. It was the computer shop. You never really went there, you thought it was just for nerds and you didn’t want to be one. Left, clear. Right, clear. “Have to be careful!” You thought to yourself. Like you said it out loud, an anonymous voice said: “Yes, yes you do.”
Mattie
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