I'm looking for feedback for my dream video game project: Ju'maze the Jag'zara

I've written a summary about the games plot. It would mean a lot to me for anybody to give it a read and tell me any thoughts on it. Thank you 😊

Hey guys I have this short summary that I wanted to share with everyone. This is just a basic story plot I had for a video game I wanna make in the future. Feedback would really help 👍

It's Ju'maze again! And he's rocking a new style. 😎🐆

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I'm redoing them again 😄

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Made a ref sheet for her lol