can someone tell me what am i doing wrong?

anyone got some tips to make it look more scary/disturbing?

Teaser 1

BOY THIS CAMERA LOOK BROKEN

(Joke aside, heres the Wip of camera!)

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Chiaki Nanami!

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Path of Kami: The Evolution of the Lore

What you all think

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