I'm not gonna tell you what this is about BUT, how can I make this better?

I sadly couldn't work with the perspective I wanted so far and this is just a simple sketch, but the better the sketch the better the end product

Look at this so far, doesn't it look Awesome!

second pic is how the first pic makes me feel ween I look at it XD

and then last pic how all this looks at the moment

pretty much I'm trying out how this will work and if it doesn't I try the other option