Look at this so far, doesn't it look Awesome!

second pic is how the first pic makes me feel ween I look at it XD

and then last pic how all this looks at the moment

pretty much I'm trying out how this will work and if it doesn't I try the other option

I'm not gonna tell you what this is about BUT, how can I make this better?

I sadly couldn't work with the perspective I wanted so far and this is just a simple sketch, but the better the sketch the better the end product