Questions in Yap and Yell

Wh... why did I make this image and then post it over half a year ago...?

Yip!

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Speaking of the fanart question from yesterday, Did you guys know I save all of your fan art?

All of the art I have seen really means a lot to me, and inspires me to keep working on the series :)

thank you guys!

Small question.

Which change looks better