Remi's Quest

Overall this isn't a bad first attempt but there are definitely things that could be improved. First you should definitely lengthen the demo. while not bad on it's own it doesn't really have enough time to really get you to care about what is going on. everything just kind of happens with little explanation which is if to an extent as long as there is at lease enough info for players to speculate what will happen next. only other issue i really had is the lack of proper use of walls. i recommend checking out the youtube channel toasty time. he posts lots of rpg maker tips and trick's videos and reviews a lot of small rpg maker games which is a great way to see what other people got right or wrong. also definitely join his discord server toasty's salad. there are plenty of other rpg maker users who would be more than happy to give you advice for improvement or just talk about rpg maker in general.