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vertigoelectric @vertigoelectric

I gave your test build a try. Not much to do yet, is there? Did I miss anything?
https://youtu.be/WIoke-NE_nw

CrocoKyle @CrocoKyle

Hey there! Played your game! Check it out below:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8lKjD23yjrY

Bitterinpixels @Bitterinpixels

It looks very interesting and pretty so far, I'm looking forward to play the full demo and maybe make a gameplay ;)

Frogge @Frogge

This looks interesting! I'll write down some feedback as I play.

Nice title screen!
I think you might want to get some help with proofreading this. There's a lot of grammar issues. I'd be willing to help out if you want, though my english is not the best either.
The mouse sensitivity is so slow, especially horizontally. It's quite annoying. I'd recommend making it a little faster.
The flashlight looks kind of bad. I don't think it's very necessary anyway, as it is easy enough to see without it. Also really weird how it is shown on your phone, isn't it your phone's flashlight you're using?
I think it would be cool if you made it so that there was some bright light coming from behind the phone when you turned on the flashlight.
Anyway, I think that's all I can say for now. I exit the room, but couldn't open any of the other doors. Is there somewhere I can actually go?
There's some stuff you should probably fix with this, but it's not looking too shabby so far!

Synopsis:
Keiko, a apparently normal girl teenager, recently lost her mother, when his little sister born. But tragically, both died in the birth. Now, Keiko blame her stepfather for theirs death. But Keiko, is not what she appears to be...as everyone has it's own dark inside itself, the true Keiko darkness is not equal as everyone...

Following the development:
[THIS PROJECT IS PARALYZED. I'M WORKING ON Wings of Ashes, CHECKOUT HERE ON GAMEJOLT!]
As the game is under development, there is not much to show. You can follow the updates here, in the Patreon Page, in the Website/Blog and see even more on Twitter. #fangame

Development Stage

Early Access

Engine/Language

Unity

Published On

February 12, 2017