should i change the dialogue here

(full dialogue in article)

https://gamejolt.com/p/which-do-you-think-is-better-more-emotion…

there is no way finale won

so heals work

New ThumbNail How Do You think it looks?

it's like he's Stronger Then Me

a.

be this high, the bills can not

heya

This is what ive been working on for now

but like why is this art kinda good-

I was then thrown back into the mental asylum