There were so many things wrong with this "story" to begin with, but I will highlight some:
Unnecessary characters that just worked as a plot devices.
Way too much (irrelevant) information about our characters.
Literally a spaghetti of ideas that didn't even connect.
The cherry on the top of the cake is... Oh no, you wouldn't even believe it... OH NO.... I don't even know if to reveal it.
And this is just one of the various documents I have. Some documents are scripts meant for the VAs, and they LOOKED LIKE THIS.
Walls of texts with way too much information that isn't even RELEVANT.
And yes, I am in fact being rude towards myself! The original game wouldn't be possible to make all because of this, and thank God I was stopped from making this version.
I can assure you that the current version is being written carefully (compared to the old one). Got a lot of help and feedback from an amazing writer (you might even know him on YouTube) and friends, this time allowing me to organize and fix a lot of aspects. AND I got to mention I no longer write like in the picture above!
Just gonna say... Whatever was the old story for this game, is of course NOT canon, NOT relevant, NOT real. Probably after releasing the full game I'm gonna make a long post about the original story, who knows.
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