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New dandy's world oc (after AGES)


Who is Maxsketch

  • Maxsketch (For short:max) was a main toon until she got replace by sprout,now days she is nothing but a common toon,watching other having what used to be hers (also no she is not a self insert i just felt lazy to came up for a name and different color for the clothe)

In game stuff [habilites more explained]

One more chance

  • If max doesnt made it into the elevator on tine instead of insta dying she will have to survive the entire floor for 3 minutes,the twisteds will be faster and will have more attention span,if the floor is a blackout the lights will be on

Heavy hit

  • think about forsaken shedletsky's slash hability but instead of a sword is a crowbar,thats basicly heavy hit

In game stuff [Random stuff]

  • Max would be able to be interacted with in the lobby just like dandy and dyle,she would be able to give acces to the "HARD MODE" elevator

  • What is hard mode?:Well the twisteds are twice as fast,they will also spawn in 3 instead 2,blackouts and other floor events are more common,items are more rare and there will be also a huge chance for "twisted" maxsketch to spawn in a floor,but what makes it more different than the normal game its that you can put a limit to the amount of floors you want to go trough,you can go to 10 floors to 1000 floors,the deeper you go the more chances "twisted" max appear,completing hard mode will give you a certain amount of ichor deepending how many floors you went to,also dandy and dyle are replace with maxsketch,but she doesnt give you items or cards,instead she will let you choose wich twisteds will appear on the next floor,if a player is playing as max,the max that replaces dandy and dyle will be replace by a cardboard cutout of max

In game stuff [TWISTED]

  • "Twisted" max is mostly like the forsaken john doe with the stomp hability,being able to summon a file of spikes just like corrupt energy

  • She would have unique mechanic that whenever she is near and theres a tv,the tv will reproduce text and also when you get kill by her you will get a black screen with text before showing your results,just like pillar chasers 2

  • If a toon is stuck with her during the "one more time" event,the toon/or toons would have a unique ost playing,sort of like forsaken or any dbd inspired game

In game stuff [DIALOGUES]

Finishing extraction

  • "Done,can i go now?"

  • "Finally done..."

  • "My hands are all sticky..."

Descending to the next floor

  • "More of this?"

  • "Really?"

  • "When i get my hands on that flower"

One more chance [active]

  • "You gotta be kidding"

  • "I should have paid attention"

  • "This...is not good"

One more chance [entering the elevator]

  • "Ugh finally..."

  • "Nothing happen...nothing happen"

  • "Just a little problem"

Interacting with Toons

Astro

  • Astro:"Max....since when was the last time you slept?"

  • "That does NOT involve you...."

  • Astro:"...i know you are upset about the...change but we are still friends,right?"

  • "..."

  • Astro:"...i'll be in my room later if you need me"

Blot

  • "Not...a single...word"

  • Blot:"...yhw ton?"

  • "...what did i just TOLD YOU?! Do you even LISTEN or you have INK STUCK IN YOUR EARS?!"

  • Blot:"..."

  • "Thats BETTER"

Boxten 1/2

  • Boxten:"D-do you think this will ever end?"

  • "No...and it doesnt matter"

  • Boxten:"i miss the old max..."

  • "...whatever"

2/2

  • "..."

  • Boxten:"...are you mad at me?"

  • "No...why?"

  • Boxten:"just...asking,its been a long time since you talked to the others beside dyle and looey"

  • "...i just need some space"

Brusha

  • Brusha:"you look quite gloomy"

  • "And?"

  • Brusha:"didnt you used to say that you are ALWAYS groovy and never glooby?"

  • "...dont remind me of that"

Connie 1/2

  • Connie:"Geez max why the long face?"

  • "I dont know,why the DEAD FACE?!"

  • Connie:"...you are not fun,what happen the old max i used to make jokes the whole time?"

  • "I dont know,go ask the MAIN toons,they will give you an answer to THAT..."

2/2

  • "..."

  • Connie:"Ever since you been....'moved' out of your old position you been quite...."

  • "Quite what?,sad?,annoying?,GLOOMY?!"

  • Connie:"Yeah....you should maybe talk to astro"

  • "I refuse to,i dont need him,i dont need anybody..."

Cosmo 1/2

  • Cosmo:"Hey max...can we talk?"

  • "No we cant"

  • Cosmo:"i know you're upset but-"

  • "I said no we cant"

  • Cosmo:"alright"

2/2

  • Cosmo:"I think you should talk to sprout he...he is not as bad as you think"

  • "..."

  • Cosmo:"atleast a simple chat...."

  • "...i wont talk to him"

FInn

  • Finn:"Are you okay max,i SEA you are a little bit lacking of smile"

  • "...do you even know when to shut up?

  • Finn:"Wow max that sounds CRAY-ZY comming out of you,you used to love my puns"

  • "...you will be the first"

Goob

  • Goob:"Hey max,wanna hug?"

  • "Keep your clumsy arms away from me..."

  • Goob:"But...but you love hugs,why not accept one?"

  • "I said....KEEP YOUR CLUMSY HANDS AWAY FROM ME YOU IDIOT"

  • Goob:"...okay"

Looey 1/2

  • "..."

  • Looey:"...you dont have to say anything,i know what you feel right now"

  • "...you are the only one who understands me"

  • Looey:"i know...i know"

2/2

  • "...i dont get,why did they replace me?,i had everything they loved..."

  • Looey:"Dont think about it too much,maybe they just made a mistake?"

  • "But why didnt they just solve it soon?,do they really hate me?"

  • Looey:"Nobody hates you max,they just...have other plans for you"

  • "...if you say so"

Pebble

  • Pebble:"bark bark"

  • "...no"

  • Pebble:"bark bark bakr"

  • "...i said no,i wont talk to him ever again..."

  • Pebble:"...bwof"

Poppy

  • "...you are a mistake"

  • Poppy:"huh? You said something max?"

  • "Nothing that concerns you..."

  • Poppy:"Well if you say so..."

Razzle&dazzle

  • RnD:"Hey max can you do that thingy with your face that we love so much!!" (Or maybe dont)

  • "I already told you,i dont want to...atleast not here"

  • RnD:"Then maybe later?" (or never...)

  • "Fine..."

Rodger 1/2

  • Rodger:"Max would you perhaps let me interrogate you later?"

  • "I would be carefull with who you ask those questions to,mister detective"

  • Rodger:"...something tells me you are hidding something"

  • "You better keep your eye open while you sleep"

2/2

  • "You better not be here for questions"

  • Rodger:"with all the toons i would be stuck with,YOU are by far the most sad one to look at"

  • "Look who's talkikg"

  • Rodger:"...whatever,i would prefer not keep this conversation going....for now"

Rudie

  • Rudie:"Happy chritsmas max"

  • "Its not chritmas you ignorant"

  • Rudie:"..."

  • "You heard what i said,you are just in deny"

Scraps

  • "Keep your brother AWAY from me,his clumsy hands almost chop me in two once"

  • Scraps:"he doesnt know what he is doing,you should be nice with him"

  • "Dont blame if you find him without arms one day"

  • Scraps:"...what happen to you?"

Shelly 1/2

  • "Ugh of course the most forgetable one had to be here"

  • Shelly:"Max i dont know why are you acting like this towards me and the others,i know you are upset but thats not how you should be with your friends"

  • "What friends? Its been a long time since they were gone"

  • Shelly:"...you changed in a bad way"

2/2

  • Shelly:"....max i know you dont want to get near any of the mains but...maybe you and i could go for dinosaur fossil diggin"

  • "Im not interested...."

  • Shelly:"Looey will be there as well"

  • "...i will consider"

Shrimpo

  • Shrimpo:"I HATE YOUR FACE"

  • "Do you even shut up?"

  • Shrimpo:"I HATE BEING QUIET"

  • "...maybe the others are right,you are hopeless"

Sprout 1/2

  • Sprout:"hey..."

  • "..."

  • Sprout:"i know you hate me but-"

  • "Dont say another word"

2/2

  • "How does it fell?,knowing that you ruin somebody's life,can you even sleep at night?"

  • Sprout:"...im sorry but...the others already made their choice"

  • "...i hope one day you know what it felt to be throw away and be forgotten"

  • Sprout:"..."

Tisha

  • "I wish you could clean the mess of decision those idiots made"

  • Tisha:"...thats the only the only thing i cant clean im sorry"

  • "I dont blame you"

  • Tisha:"if it makes you feel better you could help me cleaning some rooms later"

  • "I would love to"

Toodles

  • Toodles:"Miss max you're here!!"

  • "oh...toodles i didnt expect you here

  • Toodles:"Can we play dollhouse after we are done with this?"

  • "Sure i would love to....if only she knew what is going on,poor child"

Vee 1/2

  • Vee:"Still looking gloomy since that day?,just forget it...please it would be better for you"

  • "As if i would do what a jerk says"

  • Vee:"Listen im trying to be respectfull here,dont act like an idot"

  • "I dont need you fake simpathy,i need you"

2/2

  • "You could have done something about it yet you didnt care"

  • Vee:"everything happen too quick and too soon,i didnt know what i was suppose to do"

  • "I know what you could have done,CONVICE THEM TO NOT REPLACE ME!!!"

  • Vee:"...you are impossible to talk with"

Yatta

  • "All that sugar inside you makes me sick"

  • Yatta:"AAAW come on MAX have some fun,you sure you dont want some candies from me?"

  • "...ugh you are weird"

  • Yatta:"Dont like you ARENT weird too"

  • "...fine maybe later"

Entering hard mode elevator

  • "What would it be?"

  • "Looking for a challenge? Its not like i care anyways"

  • "What is it now?"

Hard mode elevator [10 to 20 floors selected]

  • "Wow you are up for a long ride"

  • "You must have a loot of free time"

  • "Mmh whatever"

Hard mode elevator [30 to 40 floors selected]

  • "H-how will you even manage to go trough that?"

  • "Tch....wha-whatever"

  • "...im not gonna ask"

Hard mode elevator [50 to 90 floors selected]

  • "...i....im not gonna say a word"

  • "Eehh....how much free time do you have?"

Hard mode elevator [1000 floors selected]

  • "WHAT THE...."

  • "HOW?!"

  • "...HUH?!"

  • "dear god..."

Hard mode elevator [Max appearing]

  • "..."

  • "Hey...."

  • "Morning or whatever time is"

Hard mode [Twisted choosen]

  • "Im not responsable for any deaths"

  • "Good luck"

  • "..."

Twisted Max [Tv text]

Near

  • "Im still pretty for them?"

  • "Did my life even matter?"

  • "I tough they were my friends"

  • "Do you even like me?"

During the one more time event

  • "Only you and i"

  • "Come on,cry one more time"

  • "Cry for help,i dare you"

  • "Beg for help,nobody will come"

Twisted Max [Killing]

Astro

  • "Sour dreams"

  • "Badnight"

  • "You will sleep very very deeply"

  • "Your dreams will be sour"

Bassie

  • "Pretty flowers to death flowers"

  • "A prefect basket for me i see"

  • "Flowers are falling....of your head"

  • "Envy is a posion for the flowers"

Blot

  • "Why didnt you use your tricks,mime?"

  • "Tisha will hate this mess"

  • "You made quite the mess,mime"

  • "Your acts were terrible anyways"

Bobbette

  • "Merry chritmas,your gift? Death"

  • "Ho ho ho"

  • "Jingle bells jingle bells"

  • "We wish you a sad chritsmas"

Boxten

  • "Shhh...its alright"

  • "They cant hurt you anynore"

  • "You can now rest"

  • "..."

Brightney

  • "Lights out"

  • "Gotta save the eletricity bills you know?"

  • "YOU'RE TOO BRIGHT"

  • "You were too bright for me"

Brusha

  • "Little do you know,tisha pay me to do this"

  • "Perfect,i needed a brush"

  • "Tisha will be so happy to see this"

  • "The perfect brush"

Coal

  • "Where's your owner now?"

  • "See where gluttony gets you"

  • "You ate too much you CANT even run"

  • "Oh poor bobette,what she will do with no dog?"

Cocoa

  • "tasty chocolate!!"

  • "Mmmh chocolate bunny just for me!!"

  • "Perfect dessert for me!!"

  • "I was starving for something sweet"

Connie

  • "You die twice,how ironic"

  • "Even as a ghost you die? God you're awfull"

  • "You have die for a second time"

  • "Next time try reviving a thrid time"

Cosmo

  • "Hey sweet face,stick to the ovens"

  • "I hate your cooking"

  • "You fit better as dessert"

  • "Yummy yummy cakerolly"

Eclipse

  • "No more moon light"

  • "What type of wolf you are?"

  • "Your barking annoys me"

  • "Stop the barking,im taking a nap"

Eggson

  • "Scrambled eggs? Sure why not?"

  • "I could do some omeletes"

  • "Old man,go sit up your couch"

  • "For an old men you were quite the easy prey and here i tough you would give fight"

Finn

  • "Ooops i broke the fishbowl"

  • "Hope nobody finds out i broke the fishbowl"

  • "Sleep with your fish"

  • "Grown toon and you still cuddle with toys?"

Flutter

  • "silence suits you...permanently"

  • "The butterflies in your stomach were my claws"

  • "You blew it MUTE"

  • "Be silent...forever"

Flyte

  • "You are dumb looking"

  • "You couldnt fly away from me"

  • "Another one for the collection"

  • "Oh you're nithing like your sister"

Gigi

  • "Gambling is losers,i prefer hunting"

  • "99% of gamblers die before they win"

  • "You didnt stood a CHANCE"

  • "You were gonna lose anyways"

Ginger

  • "Wow cookies? It must be my lucky day"

  • "Yummy cookies"

  • "If i only had milk with me"

  • "It would have been better with milk but oh well"

Glisten

  • "You were never perfect"

  • "Shatter all over the wall"

  • "Mirror,mirror on the wall,who is dead toon on this hall? Oh i know its YOU"

  • "Perfect? You were CLEARLY inperfect"

Goob

  • "Where is your sister now noodle arms?"

  • "Come on spaghetti arms didnt you want a hug?"

  • "Noodle arms come give a hug"

  • "Wanna hug?"

Gourdy

  • "Where are your parents lil pumpkin"

  • "For jack-o-lanter you arent bright"

  • "You couldnt do jack eh lantern"

  • "You parents are waiting for you...or NOT"

Looey

  • "Im sorry...."

  • "I didnt mean it"

  • "Im really sorry"

  • "Im still pretty?"

Pebble

  • "Your owner is next"

  • "For a small rock you were pretty easy to find"

  • "Oh poor dandy,what he will do when he finds out his dog is gone"

  • "You couldnt do another bark eh?"

Poppy

  • "Oops i POP the bubble"

  • "Say you have a can of pop?"

  • "A shame you cant float"

  • "You were never meant to live more than that"

Razzle & Dazzle

  • "To comedy to tragedy"

  • "Such a tragedy you die but such a comedy you die"

  • "Smile some more dazzle,frown some more razzle"

  • "Your BEST act ever"

Ribbeca

  • "A skull to my collection"

  • "You could say you DIE OF DEATH"

  • "Die twice? How fun"

  • "Lets if the canines find your rests"

Rudie

  • "Christmas is over"

  • "Ho ho ho"

  • "Jignle bells,jingle bells"

  • "It was never christmas"

Scraps

  • "Where is your brother now?"

  • "I will re-use you for my next craft"

  • "De-craft the crafted"

  • "Origami? Whats that?"

Shelly

  • "Forgetable fosill"

  • "Now you are going to be the fosills"

  • "Where are your fans,shelly?"

  • "They forgot you"

Shrimpo

  • "Hate is a strong feeling for a little shrimp"

  • "I hate shrimps"

  • "Hate,let me tell you how much i come to hate you"

  • "You live hating and you die hating"

Soulvester

  • "For a knight you arent so strong"

  • "I am the dragon of your history and i won"

  • "A small ROARING from a KNIGHT"

  • "Perhaps if you had a magical crystal you could have won"

Sprout

  • "You deserve it"

  • "Now you know how much it hurt me"

  • "I hate strawberries"

  • "Your friend is next,seedly"

Teagan

  • "Oops i spilled the tea"

  • "Quite the mess i made"

  • "I dont like tea anyways i prefer chocolate milk"

  • "Your death was quite the joy indeed"

Tisha

  • "Im sorry..."

  • "I hope you can fogive me..."

  • "Im really sorry..."

  • "My dear im sorry..."

Toodles

  • "Its okay you can sleep now"

  • "Everything is okay now,go to sleep kiddo"

  • "You can rest now,kid"

  • "Now you dont have to suffer,kiddo"

Vee

  • "Oops i broke the TV"

  • "Whats ITS wrong TV,bad showTIME

  • "Nobody watches TV anymore"

  • "Who's gloomy now?"

Yatta

  • "You dont have a chocolate bar with you right now?"

  • "Dale dale dale que no pierda el tiro"

  • "Im quite the fiesta girl as well"

  • "Tasty sweets for me"

Trivia

  1. Max "twisted" form was going to be like a mix of pursuer and turmoil

  2. She can change her face since she is a sketchbook but she prefers not to do so

  3. She used to be more happy and active

  4. Her "twisted form" is inspired by the forsaken guest 666 and fanon twisted designs made by the community

  5. Her "one more chance" passive and "on more time" event is based in the LMS event of both forsaken and Die of death

  6. If max was with another toon or toons during the "one more time" passive the other toon/toons will also be inmune to the insta death

  7. Her "twisted" form personality would be like pursuer

  8. Half of killing toons dialogues are references

  9. After being replace by sprout max is more snappy and short patient

  10. She would more likely kill dandy out of all the toons

  11. She is more friendly to boxten,looey,toodles,dyle and tisha

  12. She is very vaggresive to astro,vee,rodger,shrimpo,dandy and sprout

  13. She didnt have a toon handler before the whole ichor operation

  14. She is more likely to make puns if she wasnt so gloomy

  15. Her "twisted form" voice would be like this pursuer fan voicelines video

  16. Her voice before being replace would be like scout from tf2

  17. As for her after being replace form would be like medic from tf2 without the german accent

  18. Before being replace by sprout she used to learn japanese and german,now she doesnt bother to practice

  19. All of her merchandice was throwed away

  20. She doesnt know that everyone is concern about her,she sees the rest of them as enemies expect of a few toons

I will post more of her lore later



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