For reference, this was the original... yikes. The glow-up goes crazy. The dialogue was also updated and tweaked. (saving that for later)
The old dialogue seemed very forced and choppy beforehand...
"OH! YOU'RE THE NEW NIGHTGUARD! damn... we didn't expect you to like… be here on time…"
-DJ
”Wait? Nightguard… “Wait, What? But it’s the middle of the day, am I not late?”-You
“What do you mean? You’re the nightguard, you have the nightshift?”-DJ
While it worked... it felt off. I felt it didn't make sense for DJ to recognize the player. Also thought it was weird the player wouldn't know they're the nightguard(?) And why is DJ saying he's on time? Shouldn't the nightguard come during the night??? These were many, many questions, I asked myself because of this dialogue. After a little brainstorming, I just decided to completely redo the whole thing along with the visual update.
Sorry for the slow updates! Schools been rough... Hope this can make up for it! Chao~!!!!
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