Music in Fire's hangout spot

Ello, just wanted to make a chase theme if my oc was in roblox forsaken :)

It's a wip sp don't mind it cutting off suddenly

https://on.soundcloud.com/1Xbc547UfdixXyjM9

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_AqbeY-HM_c

yo, guys, i'm cooking :O :D

https://gamejolt.com/p/i-ll-let-you-be-the-judge-how-does-this-s…

Friendly reminder, constructive criticism is welcome!

don't just say "bad" or "re do everything it's shit" y'know??

That doesn't help.

I'll let you be the judge. How does this sound?

First time singing my OWN music!