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WOW this is such a breath of fresh air! I really enjoyed the story!!! Very different from most games you will find on here. Well done!
I also did a play-through/ read-through of the game on my channel.
http://youtu.be/3CBJx59lAyk
Keep up the great work!
Nice work! If English isn't your first language, I'm impressed. There are a couple of typos ("ass" instead of "pass" for example) and minor grammatical issues, but over all, it's solid, and the use of present tense feels like it adds to the tension of the situation.
Neat setting! I like the idea of creating an interactive story to set up the world for your other game.
Interesting story. I included it in part 4 of my Adventure Jam compilation video series, if you would like to check it out :) https://youtu.be/cpSb05PuJy0
Really liked the atmosphere and the world the game plays is. Checked out spacr too, but as far as I'm concerned "sandbox" is a curse word - I'm always in it for the story never for the "sand" part so...
Short sci-fi adventure game.
This game was made for #adventurejam 2015.
It was my first Twine project also my very first interactive fiction game ever.
I had three personal goals for it:
Practise written English
Learn to write games in Twine
Sketch out the world for my game Spacr - http://spacrgame.tumblr.com
Thanks:
@Lusicz - support
mike - proofreading
Mild Language
Proofreading update
Lunar Holiday has got a proper proofreading, thanks to my friend Mike!
Thanks and Update coming
On Inspiration
Final loop fixed
Just fixed a loop at the final scene, thanks to Sykysan.
