Markipliers adventure

Dude... No.

review:

textures are stretched
don't use a gmod screenshot as your only screenshot
there is one finshed level
the movement is too fast for this game unless you justify it somehow
collision is way off on some positions. To make a good game, it has to be almost PIXEL PERFECT.

What you have make no since. First off don't call your first game "my 1 st game." You're going to need a better tittle than that. Secondly you have the name "markipleirs adventure." Now I do understand that it's a WIP but it would be better if you upload videos of the game, and also more screen shots so we can at least know what we're getting instead of one, where it's not undertandable what kind of game it's going to be. To make things worst you're shooting Spider-Man. Lastly is the grammar, it would be "My 1st game" for the misundertanding it would be "Markipiler Adventure." You really have to make sure you have a clearification on what your game is about, have more screen shots, a better tittle, and that the spelling for your tittle is correct. Other wise people are going to be unsure if they should download the game or not.