Mysterious Island

played the game for a hour or so and i have to say that it was great!) interesting, simple and engaging plot, great battle with just enough fun and difficulty, nice dungeon-crawling sections, amazing character design (Mei is a great choice for a main character - best girl for sure!) and good choice of music for the locations!) the variativity in the enemy encounters feels great and makes the gameplay all the more interesting, and the game performs very well - i haven't found a single bug up to the saltwater labytinth!) good job, WhiteSleeves!

but, with all that said, i have two complaints for the game - firstly, there's some problems with the dialogue and the spelling/wording in the game - i've written down most of the error i could find and how to fix them) here: in the prologue speech "kingdom of Obelia request" - replace the "request" with "requested". next, in the guard camp if you ask one of the npc guards he says "he care about the life of his subordinate" - replace it with "he cares about the lifes of his subordinates") next, when you first talk to chief William -"but please accpt this" - replace "accpt" in his phrase with "accept". next, when you talk to Clara for the first time she says "are a newcomer?" - replace it with "are you a newcomer?". when you kill the veteran demon he says "i supposed to be stronger!" - replace it with "I'm supposed to be stronger!". next, when you first interact with the superior demon "so you're an easter fighter? that's explain a lot about your fighting style" - replace his phrase with "So, you're an eastern fighter? That explains a lot about your fighting style."

and, finally, there's a game-breaking error in the saltwater labyrinth - maybe i missed something, but the spiral path where you walk just breaks at one point and you can't go from there anywhere( the road stops at one point and you can't continue further, unfortunately. also, i think that the saltwater labyrinth should have some more variety for its enemies - just the same-old mutated sharks get annoying pretty quickly)

all in all, this was a very good and pleasant experience! even though the game has some problems with the grammar, the plot is coherent and interesting - the quest log also helps a lot if you forget where the place you're supposed to go to is located!) the characters are awesome, the battles are difficult but nevertheless very fun, and, overall, the game is pretty good!) you did a good job, WhiteSleeves - but i think if you would fix the beforementioned problems with the game then it would become even better!) i wish you only best of luck and nerves of steel in your future endeavors!) take care!