Desert Temple

Ok so before i say anything i had no idea what too do in the game, yes there a instructions too play but there is issues with this game

Gameplay:

So I put on my headphones, and then I hear a person speaking too me, the person was telling the player where the protagonist was. So you may be wondering where do you start, well a black screen, you cant see anything in this game, the most important thing in here is too listen, and follow what the protagonist is saying. And thats it, you have too press the arrow keys too move, and then press the number keys too do stuff. Very simple in gameplay wise, but for some reason, i have tried moving everywhere, and i couldnt find any item or any clue in this game. Where i started off, was that i was in a empty room, i went to the north corner, and then after that, there was water, and then a dark room, i tried interacting, and i tried looking. But I couldnt find anything, now i must be missing something, but i couldnt even complete the game. Cuz there was really no introduction in this game, theres no like proper how to play, or even any main menu, like you have too have a main menu in a game. But im not forcing you or anything, its your game, and its your rules, but you do need to have some kinda introduction

Idea of the game:

I really like the idea, I love how you have too listen to what the person is saying, and then you have too imagine where you are. I really like that, and plus whenever you click on a button, the person also explains what your doing, and i love that. Having too move in this game is weird tho, idk why, but for years of gaming this entire plan is new too me. And your game does have potential too be very great,

Ideas:

1. Ok so what you need is a main menu, the game needs a how to play section cuz the controls are really confusing, and i did have a lot of trouble with it. So maybe if you add a main menu in the game with some music and just a simple introduction, that can improve it

2. You need to have sound in this game, its very important, for a game that based on audio, there should be some sort of ambience or some background music in it, its kinda weird too be listening too a voice with no audio in the background dont you think...? And plus if your gonna be walking around a temple, you may need to have some creature sounds and footsteps for your character, cuz the game terribly needs audio

3. If your looking too have this game popular, you need too have this game too be fullscreen, and then what you have too do is that. You need to have an ui, going too your inventory is weird enough, but not knowing what too see what your gonna pick is gonna be a little weird. Cuz you have too admit your entire game can't just be a black screen.

4. You need too have subtitles, if you want your entire game too be a black screen, at least add some text in the bottom so we can hear and read what the protagonist is saying

Rating:

3.5 / 10:

Ok this is a harsh rating, and i kinda feel bad doing it, but if you want this game too be successful, you need too put more work in what you have, cuz what you need is. (Sound effects, ambience, music, main menu, ui, proper introduction, and some maybe a little bit of guidance). Cuz i had no idea what too do in this game, there was no like proper objective, and i had no idea what too do, and the moving is pretty weird, and if i were you, maybe add a minimap, i mean you dont have too. But if you have some sort of minimap of where you are, that would be great. Alright man so thats it, i love the idea of your game, and actually you should put some work in it, cuz for a game thats based on audio, it can have a lot of potential, and plus its a new idea, that i dont think anybody played. But yeah dont think as me as being harsh, im just saying what too talk about. But yeah have a good day