What do you think of this Cube I made?

I'm trying to make a Manga but it's uh- terrible

My second recent project

FlameGDPS Lvl 1 (canceled teaser)

My recent project

FlameGDPS Lvl 2 (canceled teaser)

Super Wubtendo prev 1

Should I make a bossfight of myself?

FlameGDPS (canceled)

FlameGDPS Lvl 3 (canceled teaser)