I'm trying to make a Manga but it's uh- terrible

FlameGDPS Lvl 2 (canceled teaser)

What do you think of this Cube I made?

FlameGDPS (canceled)

My recent project

My second recent project

FlameGDPS Lvl 1 (canceled teaser)

FlameGDPS Lvl 3 (canceled teaser)

Super Wubtendo prev 1

Should I make a bossfight of myself?