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I made a fantasy story a while ago, and I wanted to share it finally, I would really like some feedback on it, so if there is anything I should know about it comment it

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UH9tRdRsssGN3pMidwoXW2eZ7qKT…

How is everyone doing? what Story's have you been working on, and how about you show some of it in the Story/writing Community, i would love to see it

hey anyone interestet in joing a community all about storys and helping it out? ^^
https://gamejolt.com/c/StoryWriting-6k46pz
please come join use, make it better, and most of all share your storys

Read this story I made! This is me just irl for nameings :)

https://www.quotev.com/story/15960882/AZ/1

anyone willing to help me advertise the community?
since i can't really do it, i don't have art for my Story's nor anything els i can share about them, i can't even post anything about other story's at the time
https://gamejolt.com/c/StoryWriting-6k46pz