Deltarune Weird route/Genocide mod Chapter 1

This is surpisingly well made, but there are many things that I think should be changed.

1. Kris smiling. I felt that Kris being neutral about everything felt more intimidating and creepier than them smiling. And the overworld sprite honestly looks funny.

2. WHY IS EVERY SONG SLOWED DOWN??? Literally EVERY song is slowed down, and gallery is completely change for, in my opinion a worse song (or maybe the song is slowed down so much that I don't recognize it.)

3. Weird sprite changes. Ralsei having red eyes was not needed, I think that Jevils sprite could've used a change but that's fine.

4. EXTREMELY HARD. The difficulty is extremely hard. I actually had to modify the save to make it easier, which kinda defeats the purpose of the weird route but meh.

5. It's not activated by anything. The thing about the snowgrave route in chapter two is that you have to choose specific choices and actually go out of your way to find enemies. Maybe make a fight against a boss but give Susie a spell that one shots it kinda like snowgrave.

6. Enemies don't actually die, they just respawn. I think dust laying on the floor in their place would be alot spookier, but whatever.

7. You don't actually get stronger. Every time you kill an enemy it says "Your team got stronger." yet not a single stat for any of them changes.

8. Everyone's fine with killing????? Ralsei says that killing is ok but that legit makes no sense. This feels more like a feltarune AU then a fanmade genocide route.

   Ok im done suggesting things, besides the blatant cons for this mod I think it's pretty well made from the different cutscenes and dialogue I think it's cool. Anyways please use my suggestions I think they'll improve this mode substantially

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Also have some funny

Playing , it’s cool but i think it should be activated by something at the beggining like encouraging susie to fight/being rude to ralsei , it shouldn’t be on by default

To the owner of this mod,

Amazing mod! I really enjoyed playing it!

But there are a few things that are wrong with it. You can fix them if you want, but it’s ok if you don’t. I think that fixing these will improve the mod a lot, though.

Firstly, English Grammar.

The English in the mod isn’t good, like at all. There are lots of misspelling, no punctuations, and just sentences that just don’t make much sense. (I can make better English dialogue for you if you want btw.)

Secondly, the story.

There should really be something to cause the genocide route and not it just being there by default. Like for example, you being rude to Ralsei at the start. Or killing everything you see just by using ONLY Susie’s Magic Attacks until a certain point in the game. Also it doesn’t make much sense to have Devil’s Buster at the start either. Or finding the Devilsknife before fighting Jevil. I think you should get these after defeating him, (Because when you fight Jevil you get a second Devilsknife.) then continuing the route by just using only Devil’s Buster until you get to the King. There should also be aborts to the route too. Like not killing an enemy with only Susie or being nice to Ralsei. It is also worth mentioning that Kris shouldn’t have Chara’s dialogue either. Since we are controlling them, shouldn’t they be more manipulative and creepy? Like in the Snowgrave Route, Kris pressures Noelle into doing bad things in a manipulative manner. Why is Chara even here anyway? Regarding Lancer, why does Susie still talk about him as if he’s still alive after killing him? Isn’t he dead? Lastly, why is all the music slowed down? I mentioned earlier that you should use Susie’s Magic Attacks until getting to a certain point. Maybe at that certain point, all the music should be slowed and not be like that a from the start. It’s just weird.

Thirdly, the sprites.

Ok so, this isn’t much of a big deal but..

Some sprites are just weird. Like Susie’s down walking animation during cutscenes. Why is her eyes only being shown only in those scenes?

Also, Ralsei’s battle animations, why does he have red eyes when attacking?

Kris isn’t smiling anymore so why is there still dialogue about it?

Like when Susie says: “Your PERMANENT smile pisses me off.” (King says this too btw.)

Or in the elevator cutscene Susie talks about this again by saying that Kris has been smiling the entire time. They haven’t!

And some enemy sprites are not placed correctly. When we scare Rudinns, their “scared” sprites are not placed correctly and are cut in half as a result.

If you read all of that, thank you! (I hope it wasn’t too long. Also, if I sound like I am coming off as rude, I am sorry. I do not intend on offending anyone. I am just pointing out problems that I find with this mod.) Like I said earlier, it’s fine if you don’t change it but I hope you take this into consideration for the next update! I really enjoyed the mod! It has a lot of potential! And I hope that there can be a Chapter 2, if that’s possible! Maybe in Chapter 2, we get to manipulate Susie like the way we do in this genocide route by just attacking/killing everyone. This is just an idea though. (And yes…I know that at the end credits, it says that there won’t be a Chapter 2. But it is always ok to imagine, right?)

As for anyone else reading this, here’s a tip to get by better in the game. (If you are having trouble.) Since all the enemies respawn, you can farm exp points by defeating enemies over and over again. (I prefer you do this with the first Rudinn.) Then you will be strong enough to withstand stronger enemy attacks. (Since this mod is on hard mode, attacks are faster and take more damage.)

This feels more like a cliche evil AU more than anything, but I still enjoyed it!