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come on man...
this is embarrasing
this is embarrasing
this is embarrasing
Do you have any interest in a proofreader/script editor? If you're interested, I'd be willing to help out with that - I like the writing, but there are distracting typos, and a lack of commas. As well as that, I feel like I could give some advice on how to make certain dialogue sound more natural.
A game taking place at the same time as Hopeful, following a man named Cole, who is seeking revenge on Hart. During his journey he witnesses the aftermath of the events of Hopeful as he chases down hart, the past between them is slowly revealed. #rpg #adventure #action #fangame
Y'know if you look in the code at certain switches you can find a little info on the endings. Not much but a smidge. Have fun with that.
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1After getting some feedback, we may reconsider Cole's design. Suggestions for this is welcome.
No one:
Not a soul:
Not even Emily:
Cole: IMMA KILL ME DAD!
(He was in the right though no cap all joking aside.)
(I dunno this just popped into my head and I thought it was funny.)
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