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Frisk's Revenge: Part 1

based off Undertale

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Long ago, months after Frisk's fall, two races still ruled over Earth: HUMANS and MONSTERS.

One day, Frisk still didn't return.

After a long search, they still couldn't find Frisk.

They tried to find Frisk with a magic spell, but it was no use.

Many years later...

MT. EBOTT

202X

Legends still say that those who climb the Green Mountain never return.

Frisk's Revenge by SupFam0149

Varik had just woke up in the Underground after his fall.

Varik: ...Where the fuck am I?

Varik searched around...and found a tiny flower!

Flowey: Howdy! I'm FLOWEY. FLOWEY the FLOWER.

Varik: (...What the fuck is that thing?)

Flowey: Hmmm...

Flowey: You're new to the UNDERGROUND, aren'tcha?

Varik: ...The underground? ...Uhh, yeah.

Flowey: Golly, you must be so confused.

Varik: ...Yeah, I am. ...I fell here.

Flowey: Someone ought to teach you how things work around here!

Flowey: I guess little old me will have to do.

Flowey: Ready?

Varik: ...I'm ready.

Flowey: Here we go!

Flowey initiated a battle tutorial with Varik.

Flowey: See that heart?

Varik: ...Yeah, I see that heart.

Flowey: That is your SOUL, the very culmination of your being!

Varik: ...Neat.

Flowey: Your SOUL starts off weak, but can grow strong if you gain a lot of LV.

Varik: (...I'd like to try that. I'm not really of a MERCY guy.)

Flowey: What's LV stand for? Why, LOVE, of course!

Varik: (Of fucking course it stands for LOVE.)

Flowey: You want some LOVE, don't yo-

Varik: ...Hell. Fucking. No. Man. I don't know who the fuck you are or what even are you, but, you gotta change the LV to something. Let's say, uhh, what if, it was called "KILLS" and everytime it increased, your HP did?

Flowey: ...That's not how things work here.

Varik: Of course you'd say that. Go somewhere else, you weird ass fuck.

A few seconds later, Flowey understood and left. Toriel came.

Varik: (Damn...)

Toriel: Ah. I apologize for...whatever that thing is.

Toriel: I am TORIEL, caretaker of the RUINS.

Toriel: I pass through this place every day to see if anyone has fallen down.

Toriel: You remind me of someone named "Frisk", who fell down here but went missing.

Varik: (...Who the fuck is Frisk?)

Toriel: Come! I will guide you through the catacombs.

Varik: (This is going to be good.)

Varik...was kind of developing a crush on Toriel for some reason. But, I wouldn't really explain here anymore.

Toriel: This way.

Varik followed Toriel. The shadow of the ruins are looming above towards them, filling Varik with Hope.

Varik saved his SAVE file, while his HP was restored.

Varik kept following Toriel.

Toriel: Welcome to your new home...what is your name, or you do not have a name?

Varik: ...Uhh, it's Varik.

Toriel: Varik. How interesting. I have...quite heard of that name before.

Toriel: Now. Allow me to teach you the education of how things work in the RUINS.

Toriel teached Varik the education of how things work in the RUINS.

Toriel: The RUINS are full of puzzles.

Toriel: Ancient fusions between puzzles and doorkeys.

Toriel: One must solve them to move from room to room.

Toriel: Please adjust yourself to the sight of them.

Varik followed Toriel.

Toriel: To make progress here, you will need to trigger several switches.

Toriel: Do not worry, I have labelled the ones that you need to flip.

Varik triggered several switches.

Toriel: Splendid! I am proud of you, Varik.

Varik: ...Thanks.

Toriel: Let us move to the next room.

Varik and Toriel moved to the next room.

Toriel: You know, Frisk was a human living in the UNDERGROUND before they went missing. You know what to do, right?

Varik: Yeah. I can handle it.

Toriel: Okay. Do not be shy now.

Varik encountered the Dummy.

Varik attacked the Dummy!

The Dummy got stabbed and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 0 EXP and 0 GOLD.

Toriel: Ahh, the dummies are not for fighting! They are for talking!

Varik: ...Toriel, you played that Halloween Hack, right?

Toriel: My apologies. I have not played that before. Come now.

Varik followed Toriel.

Toriel: There is another puzzle in this room...

Toriel: I wonder if you can solve it?

Varik followed Toriel.

Froggit attacks Varik!

Varik attacked Froggit!

Froggit got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 10 EXP and 20 GOLD.

Varik's LOVE increased.

Varik continued to follow Toriel.

Toriel: This is the puzzle, but...

Varik: (Who the fuck would wanna solve that?)

Toriel: Here, take my hand for a moment.

Varik took Toriel's hand for a moment.

Varik: (Oh my...)

Varik and Toriel solved the puzzle.

Toriel: Puzzles seem a little too dangerous for now.

Varik followed Toriel.

Toriel: You have done excellently thus far, Varik.

Varik: ...Thanks.

Toriel: However...I have a difficult request to ask you.

Varik: ...What is it?

Toriel: I would like you to walk to the end of the room by yourself.

Toriel: Forgive me for this.

Toriel ran to a pillar. Varik walked to the end of the room by himself.

Toriel: ...

Varik: ...

Toriel: ...

Varik: ...

Varik finally walked to the end of the room by himself. Toriel came out of the pillar.

Toriel: Greetings, Varik. Do not worry, I did not leave you.

Toriel: I was merely behind this pillar the whole time.

Toriel: Thank you for trusting me.

Toriel: However, there was an important reason for this exercise.

Varik: ...Why?

Toriel: To test your independence.

Varik: (...I have good independence, fuckin' bitch...)

Toriel: I must attend to some business, and you must stay alone for a while.

Varik: ...Well, shit.

Toriel: Varik!

Varik: What? I'm a grown human.

Toriel: My apologies. I thought you was Frisk.

Varik: Haha, very funny.

Toriel: Please remain here. It is dangerous to explore by yourself.

Toriel used Toriel's Idea.

Toriel: I have an idea.

Varik: What is your idea?

Toriel: I will give you a CELL PHONE.

Varik: But I already have a CELL PHONE.

Toriel: Oh! ...Then, I will just register my phone number on your phone.

Toriel registered her phone number on Varik's phone.

Toriel: If you have a need for anything, just call.

Toriel: Be good, alright?

Varik: Alright.

Toriel left. Varik also went to leave. Ring...

Toriel: Hello? This is TORIEL.

Toriel: You have not left the room, have you?

Varik: ...I'm about to.

Toriel: There are a few puzzles that I have not yet explained. But, go ahead, solve them.

Toriel hung up.

Varik: (...She's so sweet...)

Playfully crinkling through the leaves fills Varik with Hope.

Varik saved his file and his HP was fully restored.

Whimsun approached meekly!

Varik attacked Whimsun!

Whimsun got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 2 EXP and 2 GOLD.

Varik continued their progress.

Whimsun approached meekly!

Varik attacked Whimsun!

Whimsun got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 2 EXP and 2 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Ring...

Toriel: Hello? This is TORIEL.

Toriel: For no reason in particular... Which do you prefer?

Toriel: Cinnamon or butterscotch?

Varik: ...Cinnamon.

Toriel: Oh, I see. Thank you very much!

Click...

Varik continued his progress.

Ring...

Toriel: Hello? This is TORIEL.

Toriel: You do not dislike butterscotch, do you?

Varik: ...No.

Toriel: Oh. Carry on, then.

Click...

Varik continued his progress.

Ring...

Toriel: Hello?

Toriel: You do not have any allergies, do you?

Varik: ...Why are you asking?

Toriel: Huh? Why am I asking?

Toriel: No reason... No reason at all.

Click...

Varik continued his progress.

Whimsun approached meekly!

Varik attacked Whimsun!

Whimsun got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 2 EXP and 2 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Froggit hopped close!

Varik attacked Froggit!

17 HP of damage to Froggit!

Froggit: Ribbit, ribbit.

Froggit hopped at Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Froggit doesn't seem to know why it's here.

Varik attacked Froggit!

Froggit got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 3 EXP and 2 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

A pair of Froggits hop towards Varik!

Varik attacked Froggit A!

11 HP of damage to Froggit A!

Froggit A: Ribbit, ribbit.

Froggit B: Ribbit, ribbit.

Froggit A and B attacked Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Froggit hops to and fro.

Varik attacked Froggit A!

Froggit A got hurt and turned into dust.

Froggit: Ribbit, ribbit.

Froggit hopped at Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Froggit doesn't seem to know why it's here.

Varik attacked Froggit!

21 HP of damage to Froggit!

Froggit: Ribbit, ribbit.

Froggit hopped at Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Froggit doesn't seem to know why it's here.

Varik attacked Froggit!

Froggit got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 6 EXP and 4 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Rocky: WHOA there, pardner! Who said you could push me around?

Varik: You can't talk.

Rocky: Oh.

Varik pushed Rocky anyways and continued their progress.

Knowing the mouse might one day leave it's hole and get the cheese...

It fills Varik with Hope.

Varik saved his SAVE file.

Varik continued his progress.

Napstablook: zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... are they gone yet. zzz...

Varik: Quit pretending to sleep.

Varik moved Napstablook with force, but it caused him to initiate a battle.

Varik: (shit.)

Here comes Napstablook.

Varik attacked Napstablook!

But it didn't hit them.

Napstablook: i'm fine, thanks.

Napstablook couldn't stop crying acid tears!

Varik dodged quickly!

Napstablook is staring into the distance.

Varik attacked Napstablook!

But it didn't hit them.

Napstablook: nnnnnnggghhh.

Napstablook was really not feelin' up to attack Varik right now and apologized.

Napstablook is pretending to sleep.

Varik attacked Napstablook!

But it didn't hit them.

Napstablook: i'm fine, thanks.

Napstablook couldn't stop crying acid tears!

Varik dodged quickly!

Napstablook is staring into the distance.

Varik attacked Napstablook!

But it didn't hit them.

Napstablook: nnnnnnggghhh.

Napstablook couldn't stop crying cotton!

5 HP of damage to Varik!

Napstablook is wishing they weren't here.

Varik attacked Napstablook!

But it didn't hit them.

Napstablook: umm... you do know you can't kill ghosts, right?

Varik: Yeah, I do.

Napstablook: we're sorta incorporeal and all

Napstablook: i was just lowering my hp because i didn't want to be rude

Varik: Oh.

Napstablook: sorry... i just made this more awkward...

Napstablook: pretend you beat me...

Napstablook: oooooooooooooo

Napstablook disappeared.

VARIK WON!

Varik lost 1 EXP and earned 0 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Migosp crawled up close!

Varik attacked Moldsmal!

27 HP of damage to Moldsmal!

Moldsmal does an sexy wiggle.

Migosp: OBEY THE OVERMIND ..

Moldsmal and Migosp attacks Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Moldsmal is ruminating.

Varik attacked Moldsmal!

17 HP of damage to Moldsmal!

Moldsmal: Burble burb...

Migosp: LEGION! WE ARE LEGION

Moldsmal and Migosp attacked Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Moldsmal has started to spoil.

Varik attacked Moldsmal!

Moldsmal has spoiled and turned into dust.

Migosp: La la~ Just be yourself~

Migosp danced!

It did not work on Varik!

Migosp doesn't have a care in the world.

Varik attacked Migosp!

20 HP of damage to Migosp!

Migosp: Swing your arms, baby

Migosp danced!

It did not work on Varik!

Migosp doesn't have a care in the world.

Varik attacked Migosp!

18 HP of damage to Migosp!

Migosp: Nothin' like alone time!

Migosp danced!

It did not work on Varik!

Migosp refuses to give up.

Varik attacked Migosp!

Migosp got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 8 EXP and 7 GOLD.

Varik's LOVE increased.

Varik continued his progress.

Ring...

Toriel: Hello?

Toriel: I just realized that it has been a while since I have cleaned up.

Toriel: I was not expecting to have company so soon.

Toriel: There are probably a lot of things lying about here and there.

Toriel: You can pick them up, but do not carry more than you need.

Toriel: Someday you might see something you really like.

Varik: (Something I really like?...Shit. I forgot.)

Toriel: You will want to leave room in your pockets for that.

Click...

Varik continued his progress.

Vegetoid came out of the Earth!

Varik attacked Vegetoid!

35 HP of damage to Vegetoid!

Vegetoid: Farmed Locally, Very Locally

Varik: You can't talk, you idiot.

Vegetoid: Oh

Vegetoid stopped talking.

Vegetoid attacked Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Vegetoid's here for Varik's health.

Varik attacked Vegetoid!

35 HP of damage to Vegetoid!

Vegetoid attacked Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Varik took a bite out of Vegetoid.

Varik recovered 5 HP!

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 0 EXP and 0 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Migosp crawled up close!

Varik attacked Moldsmal!

35 HP of damage to Moldsmal!

Moldsmal: Burble burb...

Migosp: OBEY THE OVERMIND ..

Moldsmal and Migosp attacked Varik!

9 HP of damage to Varik!

Moldsmal burbles quietly.

Varik attacked Moldsmal!

Moldsmal spoiled and turned into dust.

Migosp: La la~ Just be yourself~

Migosp danced!

It did not work on Varik!

Migosp doesn't have a care in the world.

Varik attacked Migosp!

24 HP of damage to Migosp!

Migosp: Bein' me is the best!

Migosp danced!

It did not work on Varik!

Migosp doesn't have a care in the world.

Varik attacked Migosp!

Migosp got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 8 EXP and 7 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Vegetoid came out of the Earth!

Varik attacked Vegetoid!

69 HP of damage to Vegetoid!

Vegetoid: Damn How Did You Do That

Vegetoid is confused how Varik attacked him like that.

Varik attacked Vegetoid!

Vegetoid got hurt and turned into dust.

VARIK WON!

Varik earned 6 EXP and 1 GOLD.

Varik continued his progress.

Toriel: Oh dear, that took longer than I thought it would.

Toriel walked up to Varik and called him, realizing he's already there.

Varik: ...Really.

Toriel: How did you get here, Varik? Are you hurt?

Varik: Yes.

Toriel: There, there, I will heal you.

Toriel: I should have not left you alone for so long.

Toriel: It was irresponsible to try to surprise you like this.

Toriel: Err...

Toriel: Well, I suppose I cannot hide it any longer.

Toriel: Come, Varik!

Toriel went inside her house.

Seeing such a cute, tidy house in the RUINS gives Varik Hope.

Varik saved his file.

Varik went inside Toriel's house.

Toriel: Do you smell that?

Varik: Yes.

Toriel: Surprise!

Toriel: It is a butterscotch-cinnamon pie.

Toriel: I thought we might celebrate your arrival.

Toriel: I want you to have a nice time living here.

Toriel: So I will hold off on snail pie for tonight.

Varik: (That's disgusting...who the fuck would eat snail pie?)

Toriel: Oh. I see that you do not like snail pie. That's okay.

Toriel went to the living room. Varik went to the living room, too.

Toriel: Hello there, Varik!

Toriel: The pie has not cooled down, yet.

Varik: That's okay. Where's my room?

Toriel: I apologize, but you are taking my room tonight.

Varik: Oh...when can I go home?

Toriel: What? This... this IS your home now.

Varik: You sure?

Toriel: Yeah...Okay, fine. I will take you home.

Toriel got up and went to the exit of the RUINS.

Varik found the Toy Sword.

Varik: Hey! This is a swor-

Varik is confused that it's a toy.

Varik: Well, fuck.

Varik equipped the Toy Sword anyways.

Varik continued his progress.

Toriel: ...

Varik continued his progress.

Toriel: ...

Varik continued his progress.

Toriel: ...

Varik continued his progress.

Toriel: ...You know what? Fuck it. I am going to just attack you rather than let you leave.

Varik: (shit.)

Toriel blocks the way!

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...

Toriel attacked Varik!

Varik dodged quickly!

Toriel is acting aloof.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...

Toriel attacked Varik!

12 HP of damage to Varik!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...

Toriel attacked Varik!

6 HP of damage to Varik!

Toriel looks through Varik.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...?

Toriel attacked Varik!

12 HP of damage to Varik!

Toriel looks through Varik.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: What are you doing?

Varik: I'm sparing you.

Toriel attacked Varik!

12 HP of damage to Varik!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Attack or run away!

Varik: No! I'm not attacking you or running away!

Toriel attacked Varik!

6 HP of damage to Varik!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: What are you proving this way?

Varik: To prove that I don't want to hurt you.

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel looks through Varik.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Fight me or leave!

Varik: No! I'm not fighting you or leaving!

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel takes a deep breath.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Stop it.

Varik: No.

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel takes a deep breath.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Stop looking at me that way.

Varik: No.

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Go away!

Varik: No!

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel prepares a magical attack.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: ...

Toriel attacked Varik!

Just missed!

Toriel looks through Varik.

Varik spared Toriel!

Toriel: Listen. That kid named Frisk is missing, and if you see them, they might think you are an enemy and you will die.

Varik: How will a kid hit me? I have a kid, they don't hit me.

Varik had enough with Toriel.

Varik: Fuck this.

Toriel: Wh-

Varik attacked Toriel!

440 HP of damage to Toriel!

Toriel: Y... you... really hate me that much?

Toriel: Now I see who I was protecting by keeping you here.

Toriel: Not you...

Toriel: But them!

Toriel: Ha... ha...

Toriel turned into dust. Her SOUL floated around for a few seconds, before breaking in half and shattering.

Varik: Bitch.

Varik exited the RUINS.

Flowey: Hee hee hee...

Flowey: I hope you like your choice.

Flowey: After all, it's not as if you can go back and change fate.

Flowey: In this world, it's kill or be killed.

Flowey: That old hag thought she could break the rules.

Flowey: She tried so hard to save you humans, even the one that went missing.

Flowey: But when it came down to it...

Flowey: Hee hee...

Flowey: SHE COULDN'T EVEN SAVE HERSELF.

Flowey: WHAT AN DUMBASS!!

Flowey did his evil laugh and left.

Varik: That talking flower reminds me of the time when I was called a reverse pervert in Twoson.

Varik went to Snowdin.

Courage: Hello? This is Courage. You know Noelle, right? Well, I realized, that, since this isn't written by a prophecy, maybe I can follow you.

Courage appears to be...Rudy?

Rudy: Hey there, Varik.

Varik: Sup.

End of Part 1



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