I'm making a book and I want honest opinions on it

7 months ago

If any of you are interested the link will be here it's about my OCS Ray and Soma from when they first met it's my very first book so I want honest opinions I'm still editing these parts and there are only three right now I'm working on more but I just need to see if this is okay

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This armor took way longer than I thought it would, anyway this is Druenos, Ray's father before (1) and after (2) he met Mari, Rays mother

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