https://www.wattpad.com/1449610482-paltronics%27-experiments-book-1-the-end-of
Honestly, I like the way the story moves - it's neither not so fast nor not so slow, it's perfectly balanced. I was worried, that at some point, I've moved the plot a bit too fast, considering the fact, that some of my (unpublished) works moved too, too slow, without making any good progress. However, I've realised, that sometimes, you just need to make the plot move a bit too fast to actually make it interesting, so I don't need to worry, if I actually went too fast on this chapter.
Additionally, I've actually written from the other perspective, other than the general manager - John Johnson, which was a bit refreshing, considering how I sometimes wondered if I portrayed him right at that moment or in another moment. I'm aware, that I could write the perspective of the character for this chapter a bit out of character, but hopefully it's nothing too serious.
I hope you will enjoy this chapter as much as I did, when I wrote it! See you soon!
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