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hmm....yeah uh, this game didn't take long to complete to say the least. But even so I was laughing my ass off for the 2 minutes I did play the game, so good job with that.
So of course I have some feedback, so I'll just make a list right here:
No music or sounds, which I actually found more eerie than anything else.
There was no explanation on how to control anything I was sitting there for like half a minute just pressing every key on my keyboard trying to figure out how to make the text go forward.
Once I figured out it was the arrow keys, I noticed a minor mistake where I could go backwards with the left arrow even though I was still on the first text (I know how you created this text system, you used variables, well you should stop the player from being able to go beyond the digit 0.) since I pressed the left arrow a bunch of times when I was on the first text and then I had to press the right arrow the same amount of times to get back. (I'm horrible at explaning, please do tell me if you didn't understand.)
The resolution and the images used don't correspond so it looks really odd, this is mostly an aesthetic issue though.
And that was about it, I'm sure you will get better at game developing in the future and for now I gotta say, this was great for what it was! :)
this is a visual novel that i made in one night. i'm still at the time of writing this, focusing on Lucy's adventure, ya. ok enjoy.