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SPOILER ALERT!
Hello! I just played through your game! When you are about to fight Nadia, you can't move on the floor and you are stuck.
Anyways, i have some ideas to make the game better!
- Fix the grammar errors!
There is alot of grammatical errors in the game, it seems you have used caps lock on several unnessecary places, and you use "THX" several times. A game like this should use "thanks".
-Add music!
In the overworld, there is no music. Only in the battles. The game would be nicer to play with music!
-Add story to the other characters in your team!
Suddenly, when you are in a fight, three other people appear in your team. Nothing is mentioned about them, they just are there. You should at least mention them or something, so it makes more sense.
-Who is Tore and Cindy?
You kill Tore and Cindy, but you don't know anything about them. You should at least add something about them.
(PS: Tore's name in the battle is just Goblin)
If you add these things, and fix Nadia's room, this may become a good game!
Lance's adventure
A game created by Cal.
This game is about a boy named Lance. He fights against The Evil Witch Nadia and Bob Arne.
#rpg
