The Cycle

I really liked this game. I was very immersed and the soundtrack felt very fitting. There are a lot of small inconsistencies, but none of them are badly story or immersionbreaking. Overall a good game and a good use of time.

There are some points of improvement of course:

• Not al controls are taken away from the player while reading notes, this makes trying to move still audible and the player able to turn

• More variation in footsteps would be nice (if only change in pitch)

• I'd suggest implementing a jumping and/or landing sound

• The text pops up before the lighning strike, so maybe put a little more delay on that

• A pauze menu would be nice

• Sometimes when trying to close a note it doesn't do that the first time after pressing 'E'

• Falling from the stairs at the end is instant which gives a strange feeling, and movement speed is increased on the stairs

• Spelling mistake 'authanasia' should be 'euthanasia'

These are a lot of points I could find, but they are all very small things, and other people might not even notice them.

Things that I especially liked were the dynamic soundtrack, transitions were very smooth, and I want to say again how much I liked the atmosphere and the story.

Keep up the good work Joost :3