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(NO OFFENCE but...) looks lame...

Okay it's time for the review. I've been playing you game for about 10 minutes and let me say, the story is not original, but it is well played out. The grammar is full of mistakes and some sentences were hardly understandble for me, I suggest you ask for other people to check on your "scripts". Then comes the thing that all your assets are pre-made. The map, it has some shadows placed wrongly, forgotten to be finished and some parts lack sense, for example: half of the town has the buildings connected by some way to the road, other half doesn't, the road ends and there's a gap in the next scene and then there it is again going. I have not played more because of my lack of time currently, but I have to say maybe it's for the best, you have to work up more on the game. Don't rely on anothers, lately I've been hearing too much "I've have to get money to continue this game or make it go faster" non-sense. If you really want to continue your game, do it yourself, do not rely on others, if you went this far you can go further. I rate the game 3.5/10. In the round up it goes 3/5. Good luck on the game. (If you find any grammar mistakes in my review I am sorry, lately after putting my keyboard in parts and then back made it very... "sticky" and inaccurate)

Nice game! I liked all the references. I hate the bats.

Good start. I'm liking it so far. 4/5

NICE!

This is my first project, so I wouldn't mind constructive criticism/advice.

Episode 1: Work in Progress?!

Warning: Currently a work in progress

Optional Mini Game: Because this is the first game I made AND the first episode of the series that I'm gonna make, I decided to have a little fun and joke about the typical things that occur in RPGs. Try to see if you can spot all the references relating to other games and the RPG genre itself.

*hint There is a hidden one in the first "dungeon"*
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Mild Language
Comical Shenanigans

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