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For a first game this is not bad. It was quite challenging here and there - although a couple of times even went into the rage game territory.
Couple of thoughts:
As far as I can tell eating bananas doesn't help you in weight loss, because it has lots of calories.
Pay a little bit more attention on the controls and how does it feel controlling the game overall.
Try to add a little bit more variety between the different levels. A couple of extra assets here and there can do wonders.
That's all. I hope I could help. Keep it up! 
Story:
Mr Dante Hull is a fat guy and he wants to lose weight so he decided that he will be running around and eating bananas so he could lose weight.
Controls:
Arrow keys to move
Shift to jump
This is a platformer game in which you hve to collect all of the bananas in the level and avoid donuts.
