Joyday Diner

what happend when you feed a dinosaur? nothing, because is already in bones!

Hey there! I have a few suggestions and compliments on your game.

I see this is your first full fangame, you did great! You have your lineup and you modeled them well and the game worked. But I do have some critiques on the games mechanics

The Beaver - His mechanic is good, I just wish the phone guy told us how to deal with him, or better yet, put something in the game to tell us how to turn the fan off. A lot of people are just gonna skip right over the settings menu

Walt - The concept is there, but I think there should be some penalties. For example, you only have x amount of shocks to use. Or you can only send him back 1 room at a time instead of spamming the return button. The hallway light is basically useless, so it would be cool if we could see him down the hall, or see another character coming

The Bee/Rabbit - The vent system needs a penalty as well. I could just close both vents at the start and not have to worry about either of them. A good way would be some sort of ventelation warning, where it goes down moderately if you have one closed for too long, but goes down quickly if you have both closed for long. Player would get a game over due to no oxygen.

The Bear (i think) - His mechanic is great with the door, no complaints there

Jack - My favorite in the game, simple but urgent. My favorite moment of the game was when Jack and the bear came in at the same time and it created a lot of anxiety and tension. Model looks great too, reminds me of that wiggles fangame that came out a few years ago

The Phone Calls - I would expand on them a bit and have one every night, but it's not that important to the game unless you wanna craft a story

Minigames - Speaking on the story, I don't know what these were supposed to do, both of them repeated the same thing and that was it

Custom Night - I would add some sort of star for each challenge to give players an incentive to play them

Overall, your first game was great, but with some adjustments it could be really challenging and engaging. Looking forward to more from you, hope this helps!

This is a great game but I feel it needs more instructions on things and an update on how the ai works because I can barely keep up with any of them and hear them moving when I see nothing on the cameras every 3 seconds, and that's on night 2. I only got up to night 2 because of how weird the ai is and no instructions any of them. Great game though

im so joyous on this day! diner