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Just gave this a play! Overall, the demo is a very well done, solid game that brings to mind GB/GBA titles! I do have a few notes:
there are some spelling errors in the dialogue (but those are an easy fix and there aren't that many)
the opening cutscene to the story had a good premise, but the dialogue felt like it was switching perspectives at times (sometimes it felt like there was a separate narrator, and other times it felt that the story was being told from Alph's perspective). It would help to have a steady viewpoint flow of narration since Alph is explicitly part of the story.
the part where the player introduces themselves to "Evren" - it would help to have a background to the namespace where you input your name. I didn't get there was an input function until I typed a letter so visually it would be more digestible.
That being said, you have done a great job so far and I hope you never give up on this! Also, my notes are just that - you should only take the criticisms that help with the vision you have for the game.
Peccaviens Demo
What will you try if you’re destined to die?
That's the question you must answer in Peccaviens! A new student must try to get through a magical prison made for their classmates, while knowing they are destined to die in a time loop. You can befriend, save, or attack your classmates in an attempt to survive. But what will you do?
Currently the first two section and the prologue are avalible to play.
⚠️DISCLAMER: This game contains flashing lights!
Controls:
Arrow keys to move
ENTER or CTRL to confirm
ALT or ESC to cancel (ESC may exit fullscreen on accident)
SHIFT to run (Hold the key to run)
Credits
Created: Fahmi Uddin Shah
Music:
Fahmi Uddin Shah
Yajur Ojha
Art:
Fahmi Uddin Shah
Samraj Rayamajhi
#rpg #adventure #retro #strategy #puzzle #other
