Shadow Secrets : Forgetness

just played through the early access, i think, and while the game does have some nice ideas to it, especially plot ones, like with Koorosh being an amnesiac and also his ancestry as a vampire, there's a LOT of things holding the game back - luckily, this is just early access but still, HOO BOY, there's a lotta problems with this game.

first off, the grammar and dialogues need some work - your first language isn't english, as i presume, so, ask a friend of yours who's good with the language or who's first language is english to go through the dialogues and fix them, that would already add a lot more polish to the game) also, making text and names start with a capital letter would be nice, too. next, its kinda weird how the main character's name is KFH in the menu but everyone refers to him as koorosh in the game - perhaps KFH is his nickname? or you just forgot to change his name to Koorosh when making the game. lol. it would be nice if the game told you what you received when the witch friend of Koorosh gave him the full potion lol, especially since she's right after the merchant who sells you a lot of stuff and the full potion may get mixed up and lost in there, leading to the player thinking like "bitch, you didn't give me shit!" - ahem-ahem. also, would be nice if you got a choice menu before using the portal - if you want to keep what it does a secret then just don't explicitly tell the player what it does, just make a message like "Do you want to touch the mysterious pentagram?" with a yes or no option, that would already be pretty good - same thing for the shadow pentagram in the same forest area. next, after thinking about the game's title a bit i think that renaming it to Shadow Secrets: Amnesia or Shadow Secrets: Forgetfulness - after all, there is no such word in english as Forgetness)) next up, the first forest area is pretty cool, it's got lots of stuff to do but most if it is packed in the beginning area - i think it would be better to scatter all of the events around the map instead of having 80% of them right where you start LOL, would make the players feel a lot more motivated to explore the map, that's for sure!) next, every enemy in the game says that Koorosh is a human when even the game page's description states that he's a vampire - but maybe Koorosh is just a very human-looking vampire, oh well))) next, interacting with the paladin-looking guy in the place where the red pentagram transports you just freezes your game. nice. there's no way to leave that place, too - at least no obvious one. splendid, i say. then, the path in the lower area of the forest that looks like it leads you out of it goes nowhere - i suggest you cover it with some tree tiles so that no other player is fooled by it) next, the door for the inn in castle town is too tall - replace its' sprite with one that's one tile shorter) also, talking about doors - you can't enter most houses in the town so i suggest you remove the signs from the roofs and place some doors that display a "Locked." message upon interacting - would be way better than just leaving 99% of the houses in the city without them))) next, the stairs in the inn house lead NOWHERE, removing them would be nice too so that the players don't try to enter what cannot be entered. and you also can't leave the inn house either because the tiles you put there are blocking the exit. are you just fucking with us, KFH?

i have mixed about this early access tbh, on one hand it has some nice plot ideas but on the other it just feels like a troll game, maybe not on purpose but still. fix the problems above - should keep you busy for a day or two, and then continue on the development with all the aforementioned stuff in mind. good luck, KFH, and take care.