LightBreak

You should show gameplay and screenshots from the game at the top of your gamejolt page! It really makes it pop out more and draws the viewer's attention. Without it, it makes people wonder why they should download the demo in the first place.

Without that, you'll never really get the feedback you need.

You gave us a bunch of information in the description and it makes the game sound AMAZING. But without being able to see at least one image of the game itself, it makes us wonder "Why should I waste my time downloading and unzipping this game if I don't even know what it looks like."

Call it the Mario paradox. If I gave someone a description of a classic Mario platformer, it would really sound like a game that good.

For instance "Mario is a game series about a Italian plumber that fights sentient turtles and mushroom monsters (Goombas) on his way to rescue a princess from a dragon/turtle."

You see? Without visuals, it doesn't sound that appetizing at all. I could do the same for a certain blue hedgehog that runs fast and fights a fat bald man.

Give us more!!!!!

If you claim that the visuals/art of the game is so amazing, SHOW US!

I would download the demo but I'm not sure it's worth the effort yet. I'm just speaking for most of us here.

You did have me a bit interested though.

=D