Brawn over Brains: November Nelly

I'm going to be harsh, but I'm going to be honest. I honestly cannot tell if you were messing around with RPG Maker for the first time, or if you were just trolling with this game. As a whole, it's basically next to unplayable when it comes to things on a entertainment standpoint. You're thrown into a strange world with no explanation of story or what you're supposed to do and oddly enough seem to be required to collect babies? But let's get the biggest elephant in the room out of the way, the mapping and coding holy heck dude. This stuff isn't just incredibly dated, but it looks like a game is malfunctioning when you put everything on the same layer as your grass where there's black portions randomly there.

For those who want to play this game, I highly recommend you don't until you see at the very least a graphical improvement where the maps are actually fleshed out, and maybe there's a bit of story at least explained to you from the start of the game rather than it just randomly throwing you into this strange world that you know nothing about. Games are a medium where you show twice as much as you tell sure. BUT when you don't tell us anything for the story in the game, stuff gets confusing, and when the game is so abstract with its direction as it is, this becomes a really hard game to play through. I really do hope that this was just your first project and or you were just messing around considering that this game was seriously really, really just too much of a pain to even get anything done especially when your means of healing is the occasional potion drop, and the skill points you get don't regenerate or regenerate too slowly, and when this game is as loose as it is, this becomes a serious issue. I'd HIGHLY recommend you to fix this product as soon as you can because this game is really not that appealing by any means and the overall layout is just... jeeze, it's really too much to take in and to think that someone posted this out for people to see and giving out the slight impression that they're serious.

If you want tutorials I can link you some, but like... please, please if you're considering making this game better take my criticisms into mind.