Uploaded this on the wrong page last time... Here's the draft I hope you enjoy it! Production can't finally start on the game! Story feedback would be nice.

Characters:

Prologue:

DS: Dill Smith

WW: Wimmy Walon

SV: Strange Voice (AKA- Sacks the Smiler)

Chapter 1:

CG: Camera Guy

RK: Rick Cane

RB: Rob Banks

JJ: Julia Jones

RD: Robo Drunk

BM: Belligerent man (aka: RD)

HG: Homeless guy

EC: El Chapo

YT: Young Thug

MG: Mysterious gentleman (aka: Billy "the kid" Oldman)

LMFM: Men of low moral fiber

DI: Dr. Incellington

Prologue [Demo]:

*Starts in a house (Modeled after the ep) *

WW: Dill get the camera so we can start filming.

*Must get Knife, Camera, and optional Beef Jerky*

*WW equips the camera and fades to a cutscene*

WW: Hey guys! It’s Wimmy Walon here with my friend Dill Smith and we’re going to take you all on a little ghost hunting adventure!

DS: Alright let’s head out!

*Both go outside*

WW: Where to?

*Explore and talk to things*

[Tree:

WW: is that an “Evil” tree?

]

[WW:

WW: Stab at the camera.

]

[House:

WW: We can’t go back right now.

]

*Walking to the path continues the story*

WW: So, we’re uh… going into the woods. Hopefully we don’t find any “Evil”. Ha

WW: Wimmy Walon hates “Evil”, what about you Dill?

DS: Sure, whatever you say Wimmy.

*Keep walking until it gets dark*

WW: Dill maybe we should turn back I can’t see anything.

DS: No, we’ll be fine keep going.

*Keep walking until cutscene | steps on unstable ledge*

DS: FUCK!!

*Dill falls off the cliff*

WW: Oh, shit Dill!!!

*Runs and hops over the edge | fades*

*Still black*

SV: Hahaha nice to meet you!

DS: Who are you?

SV: Not important you’ll find out another day.

SV: Just wake up!

WW: Dill!! Are you okay? Can you hear me?

*Starts to get clear*

DS: Oh, my head…

WW: Are you okay? Can you see me?

DS: I think I’m good it wasn’t that far of a fall. Probably got a concussion though.

WW: Alright what do you want to do I’ve never been out this far, and it doesn’t look like there is a way back up there.

DS: Let’s just keep going we’re still making a video here.

WW: Alright lead the way!

*Opens up to a big explorable area*

*Talk to dead body with axe*

[DB:

DS: Holy shit what is that!

WW: What are you talking about?

DS: We need to go! We need to go!

*Run away | Camera shows body disappearing*

]

*Path to waterfall | Enemies*

*Sees blood, heads, etc*

[BHE:

WW: What are you looking at we need to go!

]

[BHE:

WW: There’s nothing there come on!

]

[BHE:

WW: You’re starting to freak me out!

]

[BHE:

WW: You look like you’ve seen a ghost…

]

[BHE:

WW: I don’t know what’s holding you up, but we need to go.

DS: What is happening to me? *Echoey*

]

*text between fights*

*fade*

SV: I’ve known you for a long time…

*clear*

*fade*

SV: We aren’t so different you and I…

*clear*

*fade*

SV: I can make this easier for both of us…

*clear*

*fade*

SV: All you have to do is let. me. in…

*clear*

[Waterfall]

WW: Wow look at this waterfall! This is a perfect spot to hunt ghosts!

*Static | Water turns to blood*

DS: I don’t know I don’t feel so good.

*Explore*

[Wall:

WW: Dill let’s summon some ghosts! Spray some shit down there.

*Has to grab spray paint | Sprays pentagram on floor*

DS: I think we’re ready.

*Portal opens up*

DS: Fuck what is that?!

WW: Dill back up!

*Shadow monster comes out of portal and corrupts DS*

*Fade*

SV: Ah I’m finally inside.

DS: Who are you what do you want from me?

SV: Who am I? I am you!

DS: NO! How is that possible?

WW: DILL!! Are you okay?

*Clears up*

WW: Dill! Talk to me man! What’s going on?

DS: HAHAHAHA What do you mean willy?

WW: Dill? That thing went inside you!

DS: Ah that was nothing… let’s continue.

WW: I- I think we got enough footage…

*Starts choking WW*

DS: Ah come on let’s keep going willy!

WW: *Choking noises* Dill let me go!

DS: What did you say willy? I can’t fucking hear you speak up!

WW: *Choking noises* God damn it that’s not my name. *Breaks away* My names Wimmy!

DS: When will you learn I don’t fucking care! *Stabs WW*

WW: *Choking noises* D- Di- ll! *Falls to ground*

*Static goes away*

DS: Oh my god… *Starts crying* What have I done… *Grabs face | Starts laughing*

*Fades*

]

*2 Weeks past*

*DS chopping wood*

CG: I’ve been tracking him for weeks I’ve finally found him.

*Makes noise | DS chases*

CG: Shit!

*Battle | DS stabs him | CG falls to ground | DS walks away | camera stays for a sec | CG twitches*

*End of Prologue*

Chapter 1 “The Hunt Begins”:

*Starts in Ricks room*

*Alarm*

RK-IM: Oh, shit did I sleep in? I was supposed to meet up with the boys at the bar.

*Get up | Explore*

*Get ID objective*

[Safe:

RK: This is where I keep my weapons…

]

[Stack of wanted posters:

RK: Really makes me proud that I took all these baddies in.

]

[Computer:

RK: No new contracts…

]

*Leave room | Driving to bar*

RK: I really hope I’m not late those guys can be assholes…

*fade | gets out of car at bar*

[Homeless guy:

HG: Any change?

RK: Sure bud!

HG: Sweet!!!

*HG walks back into bar*

]

[Door:

RK: I need to talk to the “Bouncer” first…

]

[Bouncer:

*Needed*

B: Got your ID?

RK: Yeah, right here! *Hands ID* Also did you see a group of guys my age walk out of here?

B: Oh yeah, they were talking shit about some guy named Rick… *Looks at ID* Oh… Sorry about that. *Hands back ID*

RK: It’s fine. Well might as well go to the bar since I’m here.

*Goes in bar*

]

[Dinkler Sports Bar and Grill]

*Front of bar is full*

RK: Guess I’ll have to find a seat in the back…

*Explore*

[Bar:

RK: I must go to the back…

]

[El Chapo & Young Thug:

RK: These guys don’t look like they want to talk…

]

[Belligerent man:

BM: WhO tHe fuCK aRe You!

RK: My names Rick.

BM: Rick my dIck! Hahaha

RK: Are you okay?

BM: YeAH I jUst neEd some WatER tHen I’Ll drIve HoMe… I’lL Be fIne.

RK: If you say so…

*BM walks away*

]

[Mysterious gentlemen?:

MG: Yes! I am an adult person drinking… beer and wine!

RK: Who the fuck drinks wine at a bar?

MG: I do of course! Don’t knock it until you try it fellow adult man!

RK: Alright bud… “What is up with this guy?”

]

*Walk toward back of bar | cutscene | CG trips on Rick and drops papers*

RK: Oh, sorry let me help you pick that up!

CG: Ah thanks really appreciate it man!

RK: No prob- What’s this? 2-million-dollar reward for a forest murderer?

CG: *yank paper from Rick* You weren’t supposed to see that!

*Low morale fiber men show up*

LMFM: CAMERA GUY! You have a lot of nerve showing your face here after that hit piece you wrote about our boss!

CG: SHIT! These guys have been following me for weeks!

RK: You interrupted my conversation so now I’m going to have to de-rickify your asses!

LMFM: What the fuck does that even mean?

*Battle*

RK: I just opened up a can of rick ass!

LMFM: What ever just wait until our boss hears about this!

*Runs away*

CG: Are you okay? You just saved my life!

RK: Ah it’s no problem.

CG: Come with me we have some things to discuss.

*Both leave the bar | cuts to EC & YT’s table*

YG: YO! Did you just see that battle El Chapo? That was fucking wild!

EC: Very interesting… did you hear about the money? Also if the LMFM are involved I think we should do some investigating this could be big!

YG: Ah hell yeah 2 mill!

EC: Oh, course I collect 75% of your earnings under our contractual agreement…

YG: Ah hell yeah 75% less than 2 mill!

*fade*

[Outside bar]

CG: Come with me to my place so we talk without so many prying eyes.

RK: Sounds good!

*CG joins party | Both get in car | fade*

*Driving | road block*

*honk*

CG: What the hell is going on?

*Policeman walks up to car*

PM: *Knock* Sorry sir some drunk crashed his car now this lane blocked off.

CG: Fuck guess we’ll have to take a detour…

*Drives away | EC & YT drive up*

EC: Damn looks like they’re taking a detour no mater I know a faster way.

YT: HELL YA! Time to pop a CAP in one of these fuckers!!!

EC: GOD DAMN! Calm the fuck down Jesus man what the hell is wrong with you? We can’t kill them yet we still need information!

YT: Oh okay…

*Drives away | fade*

[CG Hideout]

*Drive up | Get out*

CG: Alright quickly through here!

*Follow CG through alley*

CG: Right through here!

*Opens door | EC & YT jump them with bats*

*fade*

*They wake up strapped in chairs facing towards each other*

YT: GOOD MORNING, AMERICA!

EC: SHUT THE FUCK UP!

YT: Sorry boss… sorry.

RK: Where are we? Why are we tied up?

EC: I’m the one who asks the questions around here!

YT: Yeah, stupid b- b- bitch!

EC: We heard about a bounty with a 2 mill price tag know anything about it?

CG: I have no idea what you’re talking about!

YT: Oh my god shut the fuck up! *Shoots CG* Problem solved… *starts clapping*

RK: WHAT HAVE YOU DONE! YOU SICK FUCK! You just killed the only man that knows anything about this case…

EC: You fucking idiot the cops will be here any minute! Quick grab what ever you can and DON’T forget the body!

*EC & YT grabs shit*

YT: I’ll get the feet you get the head!

*Picks up body*

EC: Vomanos vomanos!

YT: See ya later bitch boy!

*Runs out with body*

RK: I need to get untied!

*Mini game | stands up*

RK: I might have time to search this place more than they did…

*Explore*

*Objective: find chest with info (AKA: map of appearances)*

*Police knock*

Police: FBI OPEN UP!!

*Breaks door down*

Police: HANDS WHERE I CAN SEE THEM ASSHOLE!!!

*fades to Rick in prison*

*scene of Rick getting a mugshot*

*Rick is sitting in a cell | Policeman walks up to cell*

PM: You are being let go… If it were me, I’d have you stay in here for a LOT longer!

*Leave cell | gives items back | leaves | Rick sees Julia*

RK: Julia? I should have known it was you… Here to steal my bounty again?

JJ: A thanks would be nice!

RK: Thank you! So, what are you doing here?

JJ: Oh, just bailing some asshole out that got himself caught.

RK: Jeez thanks for the warm welcome Jule…

JJ: I heard on the grape vine about a huge bounty… I want in!

RK: NO WAY! Not after last time I ended up in a different country missing one of my kidneys!

JJ: Oh, come on you got it back plus I’m not like that anymore I’ve changed!

RK: Alright fine you did bail me out after all.

JJ: Want to go somewhere safe to fill me in?

RK: Yeah, we just need to go back to the bar first and grab my car.

*fade | driving to bar*

JJ: You still living in the shitty apartment?

RK: Yeah, it’s the best I can do right now but after that 2 mill I’m going to be living the life!

JJ: If I’m helping you, I want 50%.

RK: Alright if you do 50% of the work.

JJ: Deal!

*fade | at bar*

[Dinkler sports bar and grill]

*Bar is destroyed*

RK: NO! *gets on knees* What happened while I was gone?

JJ: Maybe there’s clues inside!

*Explore bar and find clues*

[Dead bouncer:

RK: RIP bouncer man…

]

[Calling card:

RK: You mean… I caused this?

JJ: What’s it say?

RK: It’s from the “Men of Low Moral Fiber” it says to meet at their warehouse or more damage will be caused to the town.

JJ: Alright then just like old times!

RK: Are you sure you want to do this? This has nothing to do with the case.

JJ: I’ve come this far plus if you’re dead I won’t be able to pursue the case.

RK: I’m sure that’s the only reason…

*Go to car | fade | at warehouse*

]

[LMF’s Warehouse]

RK: We’re here!

JJ: Yup let’s make these suckers pay!

RK: No one Ricks up the Dinkler on Rick’s watch!

*a MOLMF guard meets them at the door*

MG- Ain’t no way you do-gooders are getting through me!

RK- We’ll see about that! Come on Julia let’s Rick this guy up real good!

Julia- Hell yeah!

*battle with guard*

MG- Y-you guys are good *cough* but you’ll never get past the snipers…. It’s s-suicide!!! *cough cough | dies*

*the group goes through a path with snipers, if shot they lose hp more enemies spawn

| enters seemingly empty room*

RK: huh? There’s nothing in here?

JJ: Maybe we made a wrong turn let’s go back and-

*bang |a hole is blown through the wall*

*a cloaked figure with one visible glowing red eye (CF) appears *

CF: FOR TOO LONG I HAVE BEEN LOOKED DOWN UPON, SCOFFED AT, LAUGHING AT THE SLOPPY DRUNKARD SEEMED TO BE EVERYONE’S FAVORITE PASS-TIME, BUT WHO IS LAUGHING NOW!!!!

*CF removes cloak*

RD: I MAY STILL BE A SLOPPY DRUNKARD BUT THANKS TO THE MOLMF I AM SO MUCH MORE!!!!

RD: I AM NOW REBORN AS ROBO-DRUNK!!!

RD: BASK IN MY INEBRIATED GLORY!!!

RK: WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO YOU!

JJ: Who the hell is this guy?

RK: He was just some alcoholic who frequented Dinkler’s, but I thought he died in a car wreck!?

RD: I may have died but that won’t stop my buzz now thanks to the MOLMF I am immortal!

RK:(dialogue choices)

Option 1: “That won’t make you happy” (Strongest)

Option 2: “They destroyed Dinkler’s” (Middle)

Option 3: ”I’ll still kill you no matter how metallic you look” (Weakest)

RD:( dialogue base on what the player said)

Reaction 1: “I don’t care, soon we will rule the world”

Reaction 2: “There are other bars”

Reaction 3: “I’d like to see you try”

*RD flies away*

JJ: That was… interesting…

RK: Interesting is definitely one word for it…

*Explore more | enter puzzle room (lazer sequence puzzle)*

RK: Whoa what the hell is this room for?

*Alarm*

JJ: Shit the doors!

*Doors shut*

*Screen turns on in the middle of the room | Robo Drunk is on the screen*

RD: HAHAHAHA *cough cough*

RK: You again...

RD: Ah yes it IS me Robo- Fuck! What was it again? Hold on I have it written down... *tries to read paper* I am waaaay too drunk to read this. *Crumples up paper and throws it away* Anyway here's a puzzle, die or *cough* whatever... *Screen turns off*

RK: What the hell is wrong with this guy?

JJ: Look it activated!

*Puzzle starts*

[Puzzle room phase 1]

*After puzzle*

*Screen turns on*

RD: What you all aren't dead? Shit time to pull out the big guns... ANOTHER PUZZLE! *Floor falls | the crew lands at the new puzzle*

[Puzzle room phase 2]

RK: Ugh Julia are you okay?

JJ: Yea-

RD: FUCK! I forgot I never finish this one. AHHHHH I feel like a failure... *Drinks alcohol*

RK:(dialogue choices)

Option 1: "You were always a failure!" (Weakest)

Option 2: "Maybe if your friends weren't such assholes you'd be less of a failure!" (Middle)

Option 3: "We all fail sometimes..." (Strongest)

RD:( dialogue base on what the player said)

Reaction 1: "You were always destined to SHUT UP AND DIE!"

Reaction 2: "Maybe if you would SHUT UP AND DIE!"

Reaction 3: "Sometimes we all have to SHUT UP AND DIE!"

*Tries to trigger explosion*

RD: FUCK! Well it was with a try, here have this puzzle instead.

*Puzzle 2 starts*

*After puzzle*

*Screen on*

RD: HOW ARE YOU NOT DEAD! I'VE WORKED SO HARD ON THIS!

RK:(dialogue choices)

Option 1: "If that's your best work they should cut your pay!" (Weakest)

Option 2: "Your puzzles are kinda mid." (Middle)

Option 3: "Maybe you are more of a fighter and less of a strategist." (Strongest)

RD:( dialogue base on what the player said)

Reaction 1: "Maybe I should just cut your life short!"

Reaction 2: "What grown ass man says mid?"

Reaction 3: "We'll see about that!"

*Robo Drunk fight starts*

*After fight*

RD: NoooOOooOOo how can this be? I need to talk to Dr. Incellington! *Runs away*

RK: *Panting | falls down* We tried so hard and he still got away...

JJ: Hey we'll get him next time, come on we need to get going.

*Explore | reaches incell door*

RK: There it is! This has to be where he's hiding.

JJ: Julia is feeling coolia!

RK: W- What?

JJ: Well you have your catchphrases...

*Enters room | DI is in the back bunker | open room*

JJ: Whoa this room is huge!

*Speaker* DI: Ah the Chad and Stacy have arrived!

RK: What the hell are you talking about?

DI: Congratulations on making it this far, however your journey ends here, as this whole warehouse is now set to explode in 5 minutes.

JJ: You idiot don't you realize you'll blow up with it?

DI: That is where you're wrong Stacy this bunker is actually a space ship meaning I will be long gone before this place is no more.

*RD flies in*

RD: Alright boss I made it now let's blow this popstand!

DI: Sadly you arrived a little bit too late, if you can't tell you were beaten here by the riff raff.

RD: NO YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE ME HERE!

DI: While it is regrettable that all of the effort I put in to your cybernetic enhancements will go to waste, it is a sacrifice I am willing to make.

*DI bunker blasts off and breaks through the roof*

RD: NOOO DON'T LEAVE ME HERE TO DIE! Not again...

RK: You shouldn't die here come with us, we can save you!

Outcome 1 (Redemption):

RD: It seems like it's my only option lets go...

*Escape*

RD: Well we made it, if you need help you know where to find me. *RD joins party*

Outcome 2 (Death):

RD: You really think I would want to go with you... *Stares* I'd rather die then depend on you! *Pulls out gun and kills himself*

RK: NO!

JJ: We have to go we don't have much time!

*Escape*

RK: Oh my god... h- he killed himself.

JJ: You were kinda harsh to him that entire time.

RK: Yeah but I didn't expect him to-

JJ: We can't dwell on it we just have to move on.

[Next day]

*RK and JJ are meeting up at ricks apartment*

RK: So we still don't have much info on Dill Smith but our main leads are El Chapo, Young Thug, and that Dr. Incellington guy.

JJ: I just don't know where we're going to find these guys, they basically disappeared into thin air.

*Knock knock*

RK: Who the hell can this be? *Opens door | Sees YT and EC | Chapter ends*