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I need your advice! I am trying to improve the short descriptions for my games before I publish my games on Steam. What do you think of these new descriptions? Do they make it clear what type of game they are? Do they make you want to play the games?

Can anyone recommend tutorials for making clothes in blender.
I am feeling a little helpless...

Who can create the most creative review for Jet Gunner: Refueled? #indiegame #pixelart #madewithfusion

https://store.steampowered.com/app/533610/Jet_Gunner_Refueled/

Anyone know how I can stop repeatedly making the same mistakes?

I remember back in the day with my game Deathly Descent I released what was, for all intents and purposes, an alpha version and called it a beta and HEY LOOK, I've done it with Hensen too...

which of these trashies do you want to see a new variant of for v0.4.0?

We asked Gamescom visitors to guess… How can Shoo stress the hoomanz?✨

➔ Wishlist Hoomanz! on Steam & play the demo! Link in bio

Play as Shoo, guardian of Planet Erf, in a cozy stealth-adventure to scare away all the invading Hoomanz!

#hoomanz #interview

We asked Gamescom visitorsWhat’s the link between Shoo & the Hooman?🕹️✨

➔ Wishlist Hoomanz! on Steam & play the demo! Link in bio

Play as Shoo, guardian of Planet Erf, in a cozy stealth-adventure to scare away all the invading Hoomanz!

#hoomanz #indiegame

creating some new variants for v0.2.0

which of these trashies do you want to see a new upgrade of?

WE ARE IN A HEAVY NEED OF PROMO ARTISTS!!! PLEASE JOIN!!!

What would you like to see first in LaLiga DT?